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Star-Crossed
Disclaimer: This work contains explicit sexual content, language, and delicate subject matter. It is intended for mature readers.
It started with a game - seduce the new teacher.
Eighteen-year-old Kaitlyn Laurent is living the American Dream. Born into a wealthy, socialite family with more opulent surroundings and material things than any girl could even fathom, Kaitlyn is the fresh, young face amidst a sea of morally-amiss Manhattan Debutantes. She is educated, poised, and on the outside - entirely virtuous. Her life, in short, is perfect.
Or so it would seem.
Inside the walls of her Upper East Side mansion, Kaitlyn is struggling. After her parents' divorce and her father's remarriage to a beautiful but otherwise utterly vapid woman, Kaitlyn quickly finds herself living in a realm of self-created fantasy, completely detached and entirely clashing with her new family – particularly, her classmate-turned-stepbrother, Marius. Arrogant and with a penchant for playing games, he is intrigued and infatuated by Kaitlyn's faux-chaste outer facade that she uses to cover an otherwise calloused heart.
When the two of them enter into into their final semester at Trinity Prep, and the buzz around campus is that a gorgeous new teacher has set foot in the classroom, Marius makes Kaitlyn a bet: seduce the man who is now her Literature teacher.
If she wins, she gets his trust fund. Money that she can use to finally escape a life that she has come to loathe.
If Marius wins...he gets her virginity.
When an initial spark turns into full-blown obsession, and her affections are inevitably returned – Kaitlyn learns that there are no actions without consequence, and some affairs are simply star-crossed.
It started with a game - seduce the new teacher.
Eighteen-year-old Kaitlyn Laurent is living the American Dream. Born into a wealthy, socialite family with more opulent surroundings and material things than any girl could even fathom, Kaitlyn is the fresh, young face amidst a sea of morally-amiss Manhattan Debutantes. She is educated, poised, and on the outside - entirely virtuous. Her life, in short, is perfect.
Or so it would seem.
Inside the walls of her Upper East Side mansion, Kaitlyn is struggling. After her parents' divorce and her father's remarriage to a beautiful but otherwise utterly vapid woman, Kaitlyn quickly finds herself living in a realm of self-created fantasy, completely detached and entirely clashing with her new family – particularly, her classmate-turned-stepbrother, Marius. Arrogant and with a penchant for playing games, he is intrigued and infatuated by Kaitlyn's faux-chaste outer facade that she uses to cover an otherwise calloused heart.
When the two of them enter into into their final semester at Trinity Prep, and the buzz around campus is that a gorgeous new teacher has set foot in the classroom, Marius makes Kaitlyn a bet: seduce the man who is now her Literature teacher.
If she wins, she gets his trust fund. Money that she can use to finally escape a life that she has come to loathe.
If Marius wins...he gets her virginity.
When an initial spark turns into full-blown obsession, and her affections are inevitably returned – Kaitlyn learns that there are no actions without consequence, and some affairs are simply star-crossed.
284 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 28, 2014
About the author
Luna Lacour
5 books76 followersLover of coffee, reader of classic literature, and the author of:
STAR-CROSSED (March 2014/under the pen-name Luna Lacour)
PULSE(June 2015)
THORN (December 2015)
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STAR-CROSSED (March 2014/under the pen-name Luna Lacour)
PULSE(June 2015)
THORN (December 2015)
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Blog (regularly updated with excerpts, teasers, casting choices and playlist music, along with other random things):
http://lunalacourauthor.tumblr.com/
Twitter:
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Inquiries:
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August 15, 2017
★★★★★! Star-crossed (stand-alone). A debutante, wicked step-brother, friend & unsuspecting teacher play a sinister game of seduction, lies & deceit with consequences!
“It's a scary thing, feeling nothing at all. It only serves to remind you that you're capable of anything. Even if it ends in disaster.”
Star-crossed (stand-alone) follows socialite and high school senior Kaitlyn Laurent during her last semester of high school. Set against the backdrop of the school’s theater production of Romeo and Juliet four people, three students and one teacher,get caught up in a sinister game of seduction.
It started as a bet between Kaitlyn and her step-brother Marius St. Vincent. It involved seducing Trinity Preparatory Academy’s new classic literature and drama teacher William Tennant. Details to unfold with story, but at stake were a fortune and Kaitlyn’s virginity. Also vying for her heart is her new friend, Tyler Dawson.
KAITLYN LAURENT, KAIT aka “Juliet”:
18 years/American/high school senior, Trinity Preparatory Academy/debutante/socialite/$$$$/dark brown hair/brown eyes.
Kaitlyn Laurent feels trapped by her family legacy and social status. Her life has already been planned by her father and she desperately is looking for a way out.
Star-crossed is Kaitlyn’s journey of self-discovery, personal growth and dealing with the consequence of her actions. Eight words to describe Kaitlyn: Captivating, strong, reflective, lost, bored, determined, smart and misguided.
“I just wanted to know what it would be like to spend some time in the arms of someone who could give me an experience to look back on; a blanket of poignant nostalgia that I could wrap myself in after evenings spent in the same settled routine.”
MARIUS ST. VINCENT:
18 years/American/high school senior, Trinity Preparatory Academy/$$$$/gold-blond hair/pale blue eyes.
Marius St. Vincent is Kaitlyn’s step-brother through their parents’ marriage a couple of years back He’s the heartthrob of Trinity Prep with girls pining for him long after he seduced and left them as his heart belongs to Kaitlyn.
What works in his favor is the friendship they shared before they became family and his apparent and vulnerable, though twisted and at times devious, love he has for Kaitlyn.
Eight words to describe Marius: Jaded, flawed, devious, loyal, vulnerable, intense, sexy and ruthless.
“You're beautiful ,” he said. “You know that? You've got that just-fucked look in your eyes. Even though I know you haven't sealed the deal yet.”
WILLIAM TENNANT, WILL aka MR. TENNANT:
28 years/British/Oxford graduate/Teacher-classic literature & drama/$$$/black hair/black-brown eyes.
William Tennant, Will aka Mr. Tennant is Kaitlyn’s new classic literature and drama teacher at Trinity Prep. He came from an affluent past in Great Britain, carrying a past and secrets.
What works in his favor is their undeniable attraction to each other, him unknowingly entering a game of seduction and though smitten by his seductive pupil tries to fight his attraction…. A forbidden secret relationship built on lies and deception…
“I knew who the real victim was, and it wasn't me. If there were some fragment of this inevitable explosion that wrote out my name in blood across the tracks, I would smear it and cry hearsay. Mr. Tennant was the victim.”
All the students admire him; the girls want him and the boys want to be him. Eight words to describe Will: Captivating, charming, enigmatic, lovable, vulnerable, composed, smart and honorable (yes!).
“He was the kind of man that those who can write, would write about. Pure poetry-murmuring lips and ink-black eyes that made me wish I could put a pen to paper. Looking at him was the most exquisite torture, like chocolate slowly melting over your tongue.”
TYLER DAWSON aka “Romeo”:
18 years/ American/high school senior, Trinity Preparatory Academy/scholarship student/dark brown hair/green eyes.
Tyler Dawson is Kaitlyn’s new friend; he is the “poor kid attending on a scholarship”. Playing a part in theater production with Kaitlyn allows for their friendship to develop, but soon is overshadowed by his blossoming feelings for her and the lies she tells to protect herself.
What works in his favor is that he is both vulnerable and expressive in his loyalty and friendship and normalcy he offers which would be an excellent foundation for something deeper.
Eight words to describe Tyler: Lovable, vulnerable, smart, loyal, insecure, strong, attentive and ambitious.
“Tyler Dawson wore his affections like a lovingly patched-up sweater; worn ragged but still entirely beloved.”
Star-crossed mesmerized me with the persistent sinking feeling that there’s no way this devious game could end well. I was fretting and wondering until the very last page, leaving me with a somewhat surprising albeit welcome and wonderful ending. A few assuring lines gave hints a few years into the future, but I’d welcome a real epilogue!
The story-telling was eclectic almost lyrical and enjoyed every moment of this angsty and beautifully told tale! I was captivated by each of the four players as they each enacted a significant part in this doomed game of seduction!
“Give me a sea of strangers, and all I'll see is you.”
***
Kaitlyn’s rating: 5 stars
William’s rating: 5 stars
Tyler’s rating: 5 stars
Marius rating: 5 stars
Sex scenes rating: 4.5 stars
Sex scenes frequency: 4 stars
Storyline concept rating: 5 stars
Storytelling skills rating: 5 stars
Story ending rating: 4.5 stars
Book editing rating (5 = no edits spotted): 4 stars
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Overall rating: 5 stars
Would I recommend this book: Yes.
Would I re-read this book: Yes.
Would I read future books by this author: Yes.
March 25, 2014
2.5 - 3 STARS
After a very rough start, I finally settled into the writing style and plot pace. Overall a nice, mellow, and enjoyable student/teacher story that’s loosely reminiscent of Cruel Intentions.
When I first read the blurb, I had a bookgasm...I mean did you read it?! Student/teacher AND stepbrother?
So of course I didn’t think twice about it and jumped right in! The beginning 20% was a bit…rough for me. I couldn’t keep up with the overly-descriptive writing. I think I was supposed to view Kaitlyn as the introverted loner who kept to herself and notices everything that goes around her, but that wasn’t the case for me.
“Glistening gold speckled against the perfect curve of his head when the light hit his skin, and while he wasn’t exactly my type (I craved a more brooding, pensive face) he was undeniably lovely.”
This is in reference to the hired landscaper, who doesn’t even make an appearance after this scene. Why do I need to know all these details again?
“My second favorite thing was watching my step-brother Marius while he played piano in the Great Room; his Armani shirt unbuttoned to reveal a stretch of sun-kissed skin. Sweat dripping between two focused, pale-blue eyes as his fingers worked quickly…”
This is the first of many observations she makes about him…and she doesn’t even like Marius! I found it hypocritical that she’s always disgusted by Marius but still manages to notice every tiny little detail about him.
And on top of that, Kaitlyn pretty much lived in her head so I wished there was more dialogue with other people. The main thing that didn’t work for me, though, was the student/teacher aspect.
That’s just blasphemy because I always adore student/teacher relationships but in this book it didn’t work for me. The reason is that both Will and Kaitlyn gave into their feelings so fast. What makes the student/teacher aspect so thrilling and taboo to me is the chase, that push and pull dynamic of where the two characters try to resist their feelings but ultimately give in. There was no fighting it in here; both characters gave in quickly so their relationship wasn’t too appealing to me.
On the other hand, the stepbrother Marius intrigued me. His behavior and actions bordered on eccentric and taboo and though there wasn’t a love triangle aspect in the book, numerous hints were dropped into the story suggesting he had a romantic interest in Kaitlyn.
But. The. Stupid. Girl. Is. So Blind. And. Couldn’t. See. That.
I’ll be honest with you, I didn’t like Kaitlyn’s character at all. She was so stiff and cold, and even though she claimed to love Will, I just didn’t see it. It all felt contrived. All in all, reading this book made me sad. I was crushed by the time I finished the book because the ending wasn’t what I wanted it to be, and what truly depressed me was how right Marius was about first impressions:
This book made me think a lot which is a good thing, however; I finished with bummed-out spirits.
ARC kindly provided by author in exchange for an honest review.
After a very rough start, I finally settled into the writing style and plot pace. Overall a nice, mellow, and enjoyable student/teacher story that’s loosely reminiscent of Cruel Intentions.
When I first read the blurb, I had a bookgasm...I mean did you read it?! Student/teacher AND stepbrother?
So of course I didn’t think twice about it and jumped right in! The beginning 20% was a bit…rough for me. I couldn’t keep up with the overly-descriptive writing. I think I was supposed to view Kaitlyn as the introverted loner who kept to herself and notices everything that goes around her, but that wasn’t the case for me.
“Glistening gold speckled against the perfect curve of his head when the light hit his skin, and while he wasn’t exactly my type (I craved a more brooding, pensive face) he was undeniably lovely.”
This is in reference to the hired landscaper, who doesn’t even make an appearance after this scene. Why do I need to know all these details again?
“My second favorite thing was watching my step-brother Marius while he played piano in the Great Room; his Armani shirt unbuttoned to reveal a stretch of sun-kissed skin. Sweat dripping between two focused, pale-blue eyes as his fingers worked quickly…”
This is the first of many observations she makes about him…and she doesn’t even like Marius! I found it hypocritical that she’s always disgusted by Marius but still manages to notice every tiny little detail about him.
And on top of that, Kaitlyn pretty much lived in her head so I wished there was more dialogue with other people. The main thing that didn’t work for me, though, was the student/teacher aspect.
That’s just blasphemy because I always adore student/teacher relationships but in this book it didn’t work for me. The reason is that both Will and Kaitlyn gave into their feelings so fast. What makes the student/teacher aspect so thrilling and taboo to me is the chase, that push and pull dynamic of where the two characters try to resist their feelings but ultimately give in. There was no fighting it in here; both characters gave in quickly so their relationship wasn’t too appealing to me.
On the other hand, the stepbrother Marius intrigued me. His behavior and actions bordered on eccentric and taboo and though there wasn’t a love triangle aspect in the book, numerous hints were dropped into the story suggesting he had a romantic interest in Kaitlyn.
But. The. Stupid. Girl. Is. So Blind. And. Couldn’t. See. That.
I’ll be honest with you, I didn’t like Kaitlyn’s character at all. She was so stiff and cold, and even though she claimed to love Will, I just didn’t see it. It all felt contrived. All in all, reading this book made me sad. I was crushed by the time I finished the book because the ending wasn’t what I wanted it to be, and what truly depressed me was how right Marius was about first impressions:
This book made me think a lot which is a good thing, however; I finished with bummed-out spirits.
ARC kindly provided by author in exchange for an honest review.
March 24, 2014
1.5 stars. DNF at 50 % Review posted March 24, 2014
I love lyrical prose (emphasis on lyrical) and not corny purple prose. When I get the impression that an author tries too hard and, in the process comes off as pretentious, my interest fades away fast. As you can gather from my review this was the case with Star-Crossed. The characters and plot but also the storytelling itself came off as indifferent and unappealing. The story was monotonous and fell flat. Everything simply plodded along without much purpose. I know the purpose of the story was that game to seduce the teacher but still. I just didn't feel it and ended up bored.
Star-Crossed is nowhere as good as Leah Raeder's Unteachable because first and foremost it lacked the magic. It didn't shine. If anything, it came off as bland and dull. I remember that I didn't fall for the characters in Unteachable but I irrevocably fell for Leah's splendid writing. Unfortunately, this wasn't the case here. I neither liked the characters nor the writing style.
When I finally DNFd the book I've had my fill of analogies and semi-colons. I think the quotes are more telling than a long-winded review.
It wasn't love. (I hope not, Kaitlyn. After all, you only met him a few minutes ago). I didn't love him. But I felt something - and that was enough to make me breathe in the air around us like it was some sweet nectar that if I didn't savor then, I'd never have the chance. He smelled of warm almond; of coffee and sweat, which might have been mixed with the espresso I'd drank or the caramel still lacing my breath. Cherry sugar still coated my tongue, and I wanted him to taste it.
Shame came flooding like a syringe shot straight into the vein, mixed with an undeniable thrill.
She had about the same subtlety of a cow chewing grass, but oddly enough, there was something sultry about the way her mouth moved.
My father was surrounded by his business partners, all in suits, their faces already flushed from the alcohol that slogged through their veins like motor oil.
The candle flame was still dancing, rising and falling as the white wax dripped down like sweat from joined bodies.
At first, his hands shot up, like a criminal marked with a red hot target; like he was facing certain death by firing squad. They fell slow as quick-sand, eventually finding my hips where they settled with a shaky hesitancy, hovering just above the fabric.
Mr. Tennant kissed my mouth like it was something to worship, something to savor. Delicate and delicious, his breath shallow as a pool of puddle water. And if I were still a child, still stuck in the age of sticky-sweet candy and hop-scotch, I would have jumped and played in that murky depth forever.
When it was just the two of us, door securely latched, my heart started humming; it trashed around like a caged animal. Standing there, no words spoken, we were like two stranded voiceless islands.
I could listen to him talk for hours about anything and everything. Literature, film; his past that was still about as clear as an aged, opaque window.
Mr. Tennant remained standing, and I watched his throat move as if something lived inside there.
It's probably a frog...
Will appeared unconvinced; skimming his hands through hair that only proceeded to fall straight over his forehead; black strands over fair and flawless skin. His natural allure was a tragedy itself.
"Jesus," he exclaimed; soft and feral in the way the words crawled into my ears, sinking like toxic paint into the crevices of my brain.
One by one, I started unbuttoning my shirt; watching as his eyes, like an elevator, slowly drop from my chin to that calico fabric.
There was an undeniable spark in his eyes, flint on stone. The idea seeped into his face as if I were suggesting he dive into the first sheet of freshly-fallen snow.
He listened without protest; his eyes quickly lapping up every movement like the constant shutter-sound of a camera; each millisecond like a frame of film that would forever burn into his mind.
While XXXXXX kiss felt like the impending explosion of a firework, Mr. Tennant's mouth against mine was like oxygen drizzling from a cannula; enabling a deeper breath; giving me the sneaking suspicion that there was a deeper strength concealed somewhere amidst entrails and bone.
I'm very sorry but this book wasn't my cup of tea. At all.
**Review at request of author Luna Lacour**
All quotes are taken from the pre-published copy and may be altered or omitted in the final copy.
I love lyrical prose (emphasis on lyrical) and not corny purple prose. When I get the impression that an author tries too hard and, in the process comes off as pretentious, my interest fades away fast. As you can gather from my review this was the case with Star-Crossed. The characters and plot but also the storytelling itself came off as indifferent and unappealing. The story was monotonous and fell flat. Everything simply plodded along without much purpose. I know the purpose of the story was that game to seduce the teacher but still. I just didn't feel it and ended up bored.
Star-Crossed is nowhere as good as Leah Raeder's Unteachable because first and foremost it lacked the magic. It didn't shine. If anything, it came off as bland and dull. I remember that I didn't fall for the characters in Unteachable but I irrevocably fell for Leah's splendid writing. Unfortunately, this wasn't the case here. I neither liked the characters nor the writing style.
When I finally DNFd the book I've had my fill of analogies and semi-colons. I think the quotes are more telling than a long-winded review.
It wasn't love. (I hope not, Kaitlyn. After all, you only met him a few minutes ago). I didn't love him. But I felt something - and that was enough to make me breathe in the air around us like it was some sweet nectar that if I didn't savor then, I'd never have the chance. He smelled of warm almond; of coffee and sweat, which might have been mixed with the espresso I'd drank or the caramel still lacing my breath. Cherry sugar still coated my tongue, and I wanted him to taste it.
Shame came flooding like a syringe shot straight into the vein, mixed with an undeniable thrill.
She had about the same subtlety of a cow chewing grass, but oddly enough, there was something sultry about the way her mouth moved.
My father was surrounded by his business partners, all in suits, their faces already flushed from the alcohol that slogged through their veins like motor oil.
The candle flame was still dancing, rising and falling as the white wax dripped down like sweat from joined bodies.
At first, his hands shot up, like a criminal marked with a red hot target; like he was facing certain death by firing squad. They fell slow as quick-sand, eventually finding my hips where they settled with a shaky hesitancy, hovering just above the fabric.
Mr. Tennant kissed my mouth like it was something to worship, something to savor. Delicate and delicious, his breath shallow as a pool of puddle water. And if I were still a child, still stuck in the age of sticky-sweet candy and hop-scotch, I would have jumped and played in that murky depth forever.
When it was just the two of us, door securely latched, my heart started humming; it trashed around like a caged animal. Standing there, no words spoken, we were like two stranded voiceless islands.
I could listen to him talk for hours about anything and everything. Literature, film; his past that was still about as clear as an aged, opaque window.
Mr. Tennant remained standing, and I watched his throat move as if something lived inside there.
It's probably a frog...
Will appeared unconvinced; skimming his hands through hair that only proceeded to fall straight over his forehead; black strands over fair and flawless skin. His natural allure was a tragedy itself.
"Jesus," he exclaimed; soft and feral in the way the words crawled into my ears, sinking like toxic paint into the crevices of my brain.
One by one, I started unbuttoning my shirt; watching as his eyes, like an elevator, slowly drop from my chin to that calico fabric.
There was an undeniable spark in his eyes, flint on stone. The idea seeped into his face as if I were suggesting he dive into the first sheet of freshly-fallen snow.
He listened without protest; his eyes quickly lapping up every movement like the constant shutter-sound of a camera; each millisecond like a frame of film that would forever burn into his mind.
While XXXXXX kiss felt like the impending explosion of a firework, Mr. Tennant's mouth against mine was like oxygen drizzling from a cannula; enabling a deeper breath; giving me the sneaking suspicion that there was a deeper strength concealed somewhere amidst entrails and bone.
I'm very sorry but this book wasn't my cup of tea. At all.
**Review at request of author Luna Lacour**
All quotes are taken from the pre-published copy and may be altered or omitted in the final copy.
March 26, 2014
"You're everywhere I walk. You're in each set of eyes I meet; every hand I touch, every small smile as I'm scanning faces in a crowd. You're all of them. Give me a sea of strangers, and all I'll see is you."
I tend to not like a lot of taboo reading material but the student/teacher romance just flat out does it for me. And boy, was this a surprise. I expected something more sexual, I guess...more lascivious, more naughty. Don't get me wrong, this was definitely a touchy subject...naughty thoughts and actions, of course. But the overall tone, the pacing, the plot, and the writing were much more romantic and introspective than I had imagined.
When I say romance, I'm not necessarily talking hearts and flowers romance, although that was certainly there as well. I'm talking of the majestic, head in the clouds, dreaming big dreams type of romance. This author's prose is flowing and pleasing...it's not hard to follow, it's not pretentious. I imagine she is very well read, and I'm not talking modern fiction. In an interesting combination, however, she pairs it with a very modern story and a somewhat bitter, angry young woman who is at odds with her life of privelege.
"We tossed our trash in the neglected bin; garbage surrounded it in a halo of fuck off..."
And she brings an honesty to her way of looking at the world...at people, especially those that she sees as "outsiders." These seem to be the lucky ones in her eyes. She makes the mundane beautiful, made me want to look at my normal, middle class life as something to be cherished...middle class has it good, right? Not too poor, not too rich...juuuuust right. Just middle ground enough to enjoy what life has to offer, to see the happy in life, to see the good in people, to see the beauty of the world. Powerful thoughts, I suppose but only in books can I be reminded to be content with what I have.
"Around us, the entire span of Times Square was ablaze in reds and greens and every color imaginable. It sang from the skies that even in their shrouded haze of suggestive gray-cotton clouds were penetrated by that hungry, energized blanket of life."
I imagine there will be readers who could become bored with the way the story seems to stagnate...there is a decided lack of dialogue and movement toward the beginning of the story. Admittedly, it was almost too much for me there for a bit. I need more action. But I held out and I'm happy I did. This cast of characters is reminiscent of Cruel Intentions...a fabulous movie from the nineties, one of my favorites...and there's no denying the similarities between this book and that movie.
The Cast:
Kaitlyn
Eighteen years old and the heir to her father's fortune from his fashion line. Her parents are divorced, her beautiful, cold mother left years ago and hasn't bothered to see Kaitlynn since. Her father feels as if his money should be enough for his only daughter...his legacy is the only gift he gives her. She attends a prestigious prep school where she gets through each monotonous, fake day by being exactly what she is expected to be: pretty and perfect.
Marius
Kaitlyn's stepbrother and the instigator of "the bet." Here lies shades of Cruel intentions, that's for sure!
"I'm not the demon that everyone makes me out to be. I simply have them; and most of the time, I like to think we can coexist."
Mr. Tennant (Will)
The sexy new Literature teacher at school...he's British, he's young and handsome, and the moment Kaitlyn and Will's eyes met, a connection was formed. NOT insta love; let me be clear...an explosive attraction that sparked a long road ahead.
"There was an inarguable coolness about Mr. Tennant; an elegant punk-rock mix of British slang and guitar strings. He was the Shakespearean rock-star, the passionate mentor. A poised, poisoned mess of pressed shirts and disheveled hair.
He was my teacher, my lover, my sole melodic malady."
Tyler
The scholarship kid...he doesn't fit in anywhere, he dreams of bigger and better things, he's in awe of the rich lifestyle that his new friend "Kait" leads, and he's probably the best, most loveable person in the book.
Piper ]
The headmaster's daughter and Marius' new plaything.
One thing that struck me different about this book is that despite the "Star Crossed Lovers" theme (the obviously pointed allusion to Romeo and Juliet), this story wasn't at all cheesy. It was melancholic, all of it's characters brooding and moody, with the exception of Tyler. The focus seems to change unexpectedly but not abruptly from this idiotic bet between Marius and Kaitlyn to a sort of battle of good and bad...an angel on each shoulder, sort of. And it's really hard to put blame on anyone, it's hard to pass judgement. It's interesting to get the perspective that we do from Kaitlyn because on the outside and even sometimes on the inside, she seems to be very downtrodden and sad, mature in ways that no rich eighteen year old should.
"Alone. Not lonely. Just alone. But you can't feel sorry for the things that you ask for...
And in other ways, she's got such a romantic soul. She wants more, she is reaching for more.
So my opinions about the characters fluctuated quite a bit. The ending is one hell of a shocker, and I'm not really sure why. What do you expect going in to a story like this? A Happy Ending? A tragic ending, a la those famous star crossed lovers? I don't know. I do know that That was my biggest WTH point of contention with the plot. I wanted to smash a face in.
I hope that we can get a story about Marius next...I think he deserves his own brand of romance. And I would literally lick him from the pages because wow...he is such a compelling character! And also Tyler...the guy really needs more story. And he's so lovable, I'm already sold on him.
When all is said and done, I think this was beautifully done. Set amid the world of the uber rich, with a backdrop of New York City, Luna Lacour pulls the reader into a place usually reserved for a different audience. I hope readers won't go into it expecting a raunchy erotic story because this is so much more than that. I believe this is a debut novel. I hope against all hope that she wont be bullied into conforming to the crappy standards of indie publishing and fast, angst-driven drivel. I hope she continues with this 'voice'. It's unique, in a world of same old same old.
Advance copy provided by the author for review.
December 2, 2015
Star-Crossed is LIVE!
l.hayes.author@gmail.com
Also, in celebration of THORN's Release Date, I've got both STAR-CROSSED and PULSE available for .99 cents - indefinitely! Grab a copy, if you'd like.
PULSE:
http://www.amazon.com/Pulse-Liv-Hayes...
STAR-CROSSED:
http://www.amazon.com/Star-Crossed-Lu...
And, you know, I'm still open to giving away R2R ARCs for these books, too, if you'd like. Just zip me an email (.mobi/.epub formats) available, and a copy is yours.
Love, Always
-Liv
Teasers:
And...meet Mr. Tennant, y'all:
(an unapologetic James Franco obsession)
l.hayes.author@gmail.com
Also, in celebration of THORN's Release Date, I've got both STAR-CROSSED and PULSE available for .99 cents - indefinitely! Grab a copy, if you'd like.
PULSE:
http://www.amazon.com/Pulse-Liv-Hayes...
STAR-CROSSED:
http://www.amazon.com/Star-Crossed-Lu...
And, you know, I'm still open to giving away R2R ARCs for these books, too, if you'd like. Just zip me an email (.mobi/.epub formats) available, and a copy is yours.
Love, Always
-Liv
Teasers:
And...meet Mr. Tennant, y'all:
(an unapologetic James Franco obsession)
March 27, 2014
This is a hard review for me to write, as for the majority of the book I was emotionally detached from it. I tried very hard to connect with the main characters in some way, and found I just couldn't do it. So, I tried to figure out why that was exactly. The only thing that I came up with is that for a large percentage of the story, the heroine; Kaitlyn spent a lot of time thinking. There was dialogue in the story; but not as much as there should have been. I recently read a book that had very little dialogue; but with that particular story I was sucked right in to the characters involved. It is not easy for an author to do, and it can be done but only if the reader is still given a lot more insight into each character. In Kaitlyn's case, if she spent more time thinking about the people she was with rather than the details of her surroundings..then maybe I would have been more able to connect. This leads me to my next big complaint about the first half of this book, and that is that everything was written way too descriptive. It became way too much and then got frustrating and boring. At one point, there was a long description of a guy that Kaitlyn ran across, so I thought he would be a main character later on...we never saw or heard of him again?? These were my main complaints of the story, and of course it carried me through to about half way.
On the flip side, I did stick with it and as Luna Lacour seemed to get comfortable with her writing; the wording got smoother and less descriptive. I fell into the story more, and I will say that Kaitlyn's friend Tyler was who carried my attention through to the end. It is kind of amusing to me because as far as Kaitlyn and her teacher Mr. Tennant went; I didn't really care much of what went on with them. Mr. Tennant in my eyes, I still don't really know him that well..and I for sure wouldn't think of him as someone I would want as one of my "book boyfriends" that I dream about! Tyler had potential though, and maybe it was because I felt sorry for him, or just that he was such a great supportive friend. Marius; who is Kaitlynn's step brother that developed the whole bet for Kaitlyn to seduce her teacher..well he was a "horse of a different color!" He was able to extract some emotion out of me too, most of them weren't good; but at least he made me feel!
Actually for most of the storyline, I would guess where the direction of the story was going to go, and then it would go in a totally differen't direction. It certainly wasn't predictable; but I think I would have enjoyed it more if it had of taken a few of the directions that I thought. Marius intrigued me, and I think there is so much more to him than we got. I would love to get inside of his head more and figure him out.
In the end, I decided to give Star Crossed a 2.5 stars, and I wouldn't say no in the future to giving this author another chance. I also would be interested to read stories about Marius and Tyler. As far as Kaitlyn and Will Tennant go though, I wish them well on whatever journey they have in book land..but that is about all of the thought I give them! :-(
Thank you to the author for providing me a copy of the ARC in exchange for an honest review..
On the flip side, I did stick with it and as Luna Lacour seemed to get comfortable with her writing; the wording got smoother and less descriptive. I fell into the story more, and I will say that Kaitlyn's friend Tyler was who carried my attention through to the end. It is kind of amusing to me because as far as Kaitlyn and her teacher Mr. Tennant went; I didn't really care much of what went on with them. Mr. Tennant in my eyes, I still don't really know him that well..and I for sure wouldn't think of him as someone I would want as one of my "book boyfriends" that I dream about! Tyler had potential though, and maybe it was because I felt sorry for him, or just that he was such a great supportive friend. Marius; who is Kaitlynn's step brother that developed the whole bet for Kaitlyn to seduce her teacher..well he was a "horse of a different color!" He was able to extract some emotion out of me too, most of them weren't good; but at least he made me feel!
Actually for most of the storyline, I would guess where the direction of the story was going to go, and then it would go in a totally differen't direction. It certainly wasn't predictable; but I think I would have enjoyed it more if it had of taken a few of the directions that I thought. Marius intrigued me, and I think there is so much more to him than we got. I would love to get inside of his head more and figure him out.
In the end, I decided to give Star Crossed a 2.5 stars, and I wouldn't say no in the future to giving this author another chance. I also would be interested to read stories about Marius and Tyler. As far as Kaitlyn and Will Tennant go though, I wish them well on whatever journey they have in book land..but that is about all of the thought I give them! :-(
Thank you to the author for providing me a copy of the ARC in exchange for an honest review..
Want to read
April 9, 2014I like the sound of this one...
Student/teacher romance + Cruel Intentions vibe?
Student/teacher romance + Cruel Intentions vibe?
March 23, 2014
*ARC received by author*
Genre: Romance, loosely based around Romeo & Juliet with forbidden and taboo aspects.
Cover: 6/10
Writing: 9/10
Heroine: 9/10
Hero: 8/10
Hotness: 4/10
Romance: 7/10
Extra book Details: Heroines POV. Approx 299 pages.
KAITLYN
MR. TENNANT
BLURB: 18 year old Kaitlyn is lost. Surrounded by people she doesn't like, she resents her money and lifestyle. She's destined for a life she doesn't want, she feels trapped. Her fathers love for her was lost long ago when her mother abandoned them. Now, she lives with her highly unlikeable step mother and her step brother, Marius, who is nothing like a brother. Once he was her friend, but now their boundaries are blurring. He's a little a little wicked and daring, and too charming for his own good.
After having to attend yet another socialite gathering, a masquerade, Kaitlyn ends up meeting the handsome William Tennant. She soon realises he's forbidden territory when he announces he'll be her new English teacher and Theater director. Unfortunately, Marius sees the attraction in her eyes and asks her if she'd like to play a game, a game that involves the winner getting the one thing they most desperately want.
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So let me start by saying that this hit a lot of my preference buttons. I have a terrible weakness for student/teacher affairs, or forbidden in general, I also don't mind a bit of taboo now and then.
To go into more detail, there's a ten year age gap for a start. Every so often it would say something a little risqué too, like how Kaitlyn may have 'enjoyed his borderline parental tone', or how she was just a kid, or how her school uniform could turn him on and how Kaitlyn, most of the time, would refer to him as 'Mr. Tennant', even in the personal scenes. These were subtle comments, few and far between, intended to play around with the taboo.
I liked how the author switched things around, she wrote Kaitlyn as more of a predator, but not in a heavy handed way. Kaitlyn was the initiator, gently coaxing William to be bad with her.
I loved the characters, they were complex and well written. The side characters were also, I loved Tyler. Kaitlyn is a daydreamer, almost a little cold hearted, impulsive and on the verge of adulthood. Will is a beta hero, he's a little eccentric, passionate, vulnerable and kind of a pushover.
My only complaint with the book would be that sometimes there was too much inner-monologue for me, I wanted a little more romantic meetings, more interaction and some more dialogue.
'Star Crossed' is quite casual, written with an upper-class voice that embodies a girls sexual discovery and the beginnings of adulthood. It mixes aspects of 'Lolita' with a loosely based version of Romeo & Juliet.
'I knew who the real victim was, and it wasn't me. If there were some fragment of this inevitable explosion that wrote out my name in blood across the tracks, I would smear it and cry hearsay. Mr. Tennant was the victim. Yet I kissed him continuously. I ran my tongue along his neck and listened to him gasp and moan with a timid noise. I had to have him, and I had to win. I had to win, but I had to have him.'
Genre: Romance, loosely based around Romeo & Juliet with forbidden and taboo aspects.
Cover: 6/10
Writing: 9/10
Heroine: 9/10
Hero: 8/10
Hotness: 4/10
Romance: 7/10
Extra book Details: Heroines POV. Approx 299 pages.
KAITLYN
MR. TENNANT
BLURB: 18 year old Kaitlyn is lost. Surrounded by people she doesn't like, she resents her money and lifestyle. She's destined for a life she doesn't want, she feels trapped. Her fathers love for her was lost long ago when her mother abandoned them. Now, she lives with her highly unlikeable step mother and her step brother, Marius, who is nothing like a brother. Once he was her friend, but now their boundaries are blurring. He's a little a little wicked and daring, and too charming for his own good.
After having to attend yet another socialite gathering, a masquerade, Kaitlyn ends up meeting the handsome William Tennant. She soon realises he's forbidden territory when he announces he'll be her new English teacher and Theater director. Unfortunately, Marius sees the attraction in her eyes and asks her if she'd like to play a game, a game that involves the winner getting the one thing they most desperately want.
“You have until the end of the semester to seduce Mr. Tennant. If you succeed, you can have my trust find. I've no use for the money, and I know how much you long to escape this place. I know better than anyone else.”
“And if you win,” I breathed. “What is it that you want?”
“Oh Kaitlyn,” he whispered, reaching out and cupping my face in his hands.
“You. I want you.”
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So let me start by saying that this hit a lot of my preference buttons. I have a terrible weakness for student/teacher affairs, or forbidden in general, I also don't mind a bit of taboo now and then.
To go into more detail, there's a ten year age gap for a start. Every so often it would say something a little risqué too, like how Kaitlyn may have 'enjoyed his borderline parental tone', or how she was just a kid, or how her school uniform could turn him on and how Kaitlyn, most of the time, would refer to him as 'Mr. Tennant', even in the personal scenes. These were subtle comments, few and far between, intended to play around with the taboo.
I liked how the author switched things around, she wrote Kaitlyn as more of a predator, but not in a heavy handed way. Kaitlyn was the initiator, gently coaxing William to be bad with her.
I loved the characters, they were complex and well written. The side characters were also, I loved Tyler. Kaitlyn is a daydreamer, almost a little cold hearted, impulsive and on the verge of adulthood. Will is a beta hero, he's a little eccentric, passionate, vulnerable and kind of a pushover.
My only complaint with the book would be that sometimes there was too much inner-monologue for me, I wanted a little more romantic meetings, more interaction and some more dialogue.
'Star Crossed' is quite casual, written with an upper-class voice that embodies a girls sexual discovery and the beginnings of adulthood. It mixes aspects of 'Lolita' with a loosely based version of Romeo & Juliet.
March 22, 2014
4.5 Star-Crossed stars.
This took me by surprise, that's for sure. The writing (I feel like I would be repeating everyone by talking about the depth and emotion) along with the vibrant characters and shocking plot made for a read that had me captivated from the first page until the final word.
This was a good one. Actually, it was amazing.
One of the big things that stuck out for me was the use of imagery in this book. The second big thing was the amount of symbolism that I caught early on (a reviewer before me mentioned the clocks).It was interesting to find that I was actually wondering if even the littler things had more meaning that just what was written. This was the first book I think I've read in NA that has bothered doing something like that.
The characters all had so many dimensions that like other reviewers have said, I felt like I knew them personally. Marius was my favorite, even if he was a total jerk at times. Tyler was such a sweetheart. Kait, unlike a lot of heroines in NA, was very bold an unafraid to go after the things she wanted, even if the end result could be disastrous.
There wasn't much not to love about Mr. Tennant. He had a kinda punk-rock vibe about him, coupled with his love for Shakespeare. He was smart, witty, and very broken. Will also has a big and surprising secret, too.
My favorite line -
"It was a funny thing, how he sewed his dialogue together. He posed what Americans would spout as statements in the form of a question. For instance, if I were looking out the window and saw rain falling, and someone were to suggest that I go play outside, I could easily tell them: well, that's stupid. It's raining. But if I were to suggest the same thing to Will, he would have likely looked at me with a twinged confusion and muttered, pointing in the direction of the rain-streaked window: but I can't, can I?
The inflections always hung with a sort of hope, like the possibility of playing in rainfall was still on the table. Nothing was impossible."
The writing was seriously so pretty, that alone was enough to make me swoon.
And...
Fans of Cruel Intentions will love this book.
I do wish there was an epilogue (explaining the 4.5 star) but the ending did work. I think I was just sad for the book to end.
***I received a copy for an honest review***
This took me by surprise, that's for sure. The writing (I feel like I would be repeating everyone by talking about the depth and emotion) along with the vibrant characters and shocking plot made for a read that had me captivated from the first page until the final word.
This was a good one. Actually, it was amazing.
One of the big things that stuck out for me was the use of imagery in this book. The second big thing was the amount of symbolism that I caught early on (a reviewer before me mentioned the clocks).It was interesting to find that I was actually wondering if even the littler things had more meaning that just what was written. This was the first book I think I've read in NA that has bothered doing something like that.
The characters all had so many dimensions that like other reviewers have said, I felt like I knew them personally. Marius was my favorite, even if he was a total jerk at times. Tyler was such a sweetheart. Kait, unlike a lot of heroines in NA, was very bold an unafraid to go after the things she wanted, even if the end result could be disastrous.
There wasn't much not to love about Mr. Tennant. He had a kinda punk-rock vibe about him, coupled with his love for Shakespeare. He was smart, witty, and very broken. Will also has a big and surprising secret, too.
My favorite line -
"It was a funny thing, how he sewed his dialogue together. He posed what Americans would spout as statements in the form of a question. For instance, if I were looking out the window and saw rain falling, and someone were to suggest that I go play outside, I could easily tell them: well, that's stupid. It's raining. But if I were to suggest the same thing to Will, he would have likely looked at me with a twinged confusion and muttered, pointing in the direction of the rain-streaked window: but I can't, can I?
The inflections always hung with a sort of hope, like the possibility of playing in rainfall was still on the table. Nothing was impossible."
The writing was seriously so pretty, that alone was enough to make me swoon.
And...
Fans of Cruel Intentions will love this book.
I do wish there was an epilogue (explaining the 4.5 star) but the ending did work. I think I was just sad for the book to end.
***I received a copy for an honest review***
March 20, 2014
***ARC kindly provided for honest review.***
“You're everywhere I walk. You're in each set of eyes I meet; every hand I touch, every small smile as I'm scanning faces in a crowd. You're all of them. Give me a sea of strangers, and all I'll see is you.”
This book blew me away. I'm having a hard time even figuring out where to start with this one...so I'll start with the casting.
My Kaitlyn:
My Mr. 'Will' Tennant:
My Marius:
My Tyler:
Opening line:
"There is one thing, first and foremost, that you should know about this story: it all started with a game."
Things this book succeeded in making me do:
-smile
-wince
-cry
-swoon
-think
-overuse the highlighting function on my kindle
-cry some more
I was really happy and surprised that Ms. Lacour was so generous with her ARCs - and I'm really glad I was able to read this book. It's hard to write a long review without giving away spoilers, but I'll try my best.
The best way I can describe this book - it's different, but beautiful. Luna's writing had such depth (as other reviewers have said) that I felt like I was with Kait every step of the way.
To sum it up - Star-Crossed tells the story of a girl who falls into a bet with her arrogant step-brother...seduce the new teacher. Of course, the bet ends up turning into so much more.
"It started with a game."
I think what surprised me the most, aside from the unique prose, was the characters. Each character really felt as if they were real people with real flaws. There was Kaitlyn, who came from a very wealthy family. She's a virgin, but not because she feels there's anything wrong with premarital sex.....it's more because she likes to be in control. Marius, her step-brother, is an absolute monster (or is he?) There's the teacher, Mr. Tennant (British, gorgeous, and so dreamy) who is also the stage director for Trinity Prep's (Kaitlyn's school) production of Romeo and Juliet.
Then there's Tyler, my favorite. He's sensitive, kind, a wonderful friend to kait...he also gave some of the most convincing reactions I've ever read in student/teacher book.
As for hot and heavy, the sex-scenes were graphic, but written in a way that just flowed so well...nothing felt like it was too-much. The romance between Will and Kait was so moving...and some of the quotes just left me speechless:
"You need to know that when I first saw you, standing there in that mask, and you told me that you weren't lost – I immediately realized that I wasn't, either.”
"Are we star-crossed?"
"Yes," he said. "But I would fight against the stars for you."
Be warned, though: there is some serious angst in this book. Unlike other student/teacher books, this one really hits you across the head and will surprise you...from Will's confession, to Marius, to the end result of what happens when you get yourself tied into a bet...and to a teacher.
All in all, a brilliant debut... and I absolutely recommend it. I'm really look forward to Luna's next book.
“You're everywhere I walk. You're in each set of eyes I meet; every hand I touch, every small smile as I'm scanning faces in a crowd. You're all of them. Give me a sea of strangers, and all I'll see is you.”
This book blew me away. I'm having a hard time even figuring out where to start with this one...so I'll start with the casting.
My Kaitlyn:
My Mr. 'Will' Tennant:
My Marius:
My Tyler:
Opening line:
"There is one thing, first and foremost, that you should know about this story: it all started with a game."
Things this book succeeded in making me do:
-smile
-wince
-cry
-swoon
-think
-overuse the highlighting function on my kindle
-cry some more
I was really happy and surprised that Ms. Lacour was so generous with her ARCs - and I'm really glad I was able to read this book. It's hard to write a long review without giving away spoilers, but I'll try my best.
The best way I can describe this book - it's different, but beautiful. Luna's writing had such depth (as other reviewers have said) that I felt like I was with Kait every step of the way.
To sum it up - Star-Crossed tells the story of a girl who falls into a bet with her arrogant step-brother...seduce the new teacher. Of course, the bet ends up turning into so much more.
"It started with a game."
I think what surprised me the most, aside from the unique prose, was the characters. Each character really felt as if they were real people with real flaws. There was Kaitlyn, who came from a very wealthy family. She's a virgin, but not because she feels there's anything wrong with premarital sex.....it's more because she likes to be in control. Marius, her step-brother, is an absolute monster (or is he?) There's the teacher, Mr. Tennant (British, gorgeous, and so dreamy) who is also the stage director for Trinity Prep's (Kaitlyn's school) production of Romeo and Juliet.
Then there's Tyler, my favorite. He's sensitive, kind, a wonderful friend to kait...he also gave some of the most convincing reactions I've ever read in student/teacher book.
As for hot and heavy, the sex-scenes were graphic, but written in a way that just flowed so well...nothing felt like it was too-much. The romance between Will and Kait was so moving...and some of the quotes just left me speechless:
"You need to know that when I first saw you, standing there in that mask, and you told me that you weren't lost – I immediately realized that I wasn't, either.”
"Are we star-crossed?"
"Yes," he said. "But I would fight against the stars for you."
Be warned, though: there is some serious angst in this book. Unlike other student/teacher books, this one really hits you across the head and will surprise you...from Will's confession, to Marius, to the end result of what happens when you get yourself tied into a bet...and to a teacher.
All in all, a brilliant debut... and I absolutely recommend it. I'm really look forward to Luna's next book.
June 3, 2014
I didn't expect much, but it still managed to disappoint me. Star-Crossed, a debut novel by Luna Lacour got interesting reviews in the community, some readers loved it while others even gave up on reading it half way trough. I am always curious when I find books with focus on affairs between student and teacher, and I keep hoping I'd finally stumble upon one that gives a well thought trough and more serious approach to the subject. Not much luck so far.
Why Star-Crossed didn't work out for me?
First of all, it reminded me to much of a lot of already seen storylines - Gossip Girl, Cruel Intentions (movie with Sarah Michelle Gellar, Ryan Phillippe, Reese Witherspoon and Selma Blair in main roles)... Second, writing was so weird. I had to re-read some of the sentences to figure out their meaning. Third, plot has so many inconsistencies and character development is really superficial. I felt as if certain things were picked up because of scandalous and melodramatic effect with no actual intention to explain reasoning of actions, thoughts or why things happen the way they did. I couldn't connect with Kaitlyn at all - actually, she annoyed me. To be completely honest with you, I am not even sure why I didn't DNFed this book.
Who should read it? Fans of taboo themes and a lot of drama. But if you want to read a really good book about this topic with all of those things, I recommend Taming the Beast by Emily Maguire.
***Copy of this book was provided by author, Luna Lacour, in exchange for an honest review.***
Why Star-Crossed didn't work out for me?
First of all, it reminded me to much of a lot of already seen storylines - Gossip Girl, Cruel Intentions (movie with Sarah Michelle Gellar, Ryan Phillippe, Reese Witherspoon and Selma Blair in main roles)... Second, writing was so weird. I had to re-read some of the sentences to figure out their meaning. Third, plot has so many inconsistencies and character development is really superficial. I felt as if certain things were picked up because of scandalous and melodramatic effect with no actual intention to explain reasoning of actions, thoughts or why things happen the way they did. I couldn't connect with Kaitlyn at all - actually, she annoyed me. To be completely honest with you, I am not even sure why I didn't DNFed this book.
Who should read it? Fans of taboo themes and a lot of drama. But if you want to read a really good book about this topic with all of those things, I recommend Taming the Beast by Emily Maguire.
***Copy of this book was provided by author, Luna Lacour, in exchange for an honest review.***
March 28, 2014
**I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review**
Thank you Luna for a beautifully creative story.
First things first...Marius was the PERFECT asshole that you want more of then again you don't at the same time. Kaitlyn was a refreshing head strong character who went after what she wanted and received some much more. She was not afraid to struggle and didn't taken her wealth for granted. Will was a shy somewhat broken character who found love when he wasn't even looking for it. Tyler was a breath of fresh air and I couldn't help but feel heartbroken for him.
What started off as a game/bet turned out to be anything but what it was. Luna was able to describe details in the book so well that you can actually feel yourself in the story.
I do wish there was a bit more of Marius and more in the ending. I would of love to have read an epilogue maybe a few years in the future.
Wonderful book and totally recommend. I will be waiting for Luna's next book.
Thank you Luna for a beautifully creative story.
First things first...Marius was the PERFECT asshole that you want more of then again you don't at the same time. Kaitlyn was a refreshing head strong character who went after what she wanted and received some much more. She was not afraid to struggle and didn't taken her wealth for granted. Will was a shy somewhat broken character who found love when he wasn't even looking for it. Tyler was a breath of fresh air and I couldn't help but feel heartbroken for him.
What started off as a game/bet turned out to be anything but what it was. Luna was able to describe details in the book so well that you can actually feel yourself in the story.
I do wish there was a bit more of Marius and more in the ending. I would of love to have read an epilogue maybe a few years in the future.
Wonderful book and totally recommend. I will be waiting for Luna's next book.
March 23, 2014
"You see, I didn't want to ruin his life. I just simply wanted to change mine."
Star-Crossed literally JUMPED out to me when I read the blurb.
18 year old Kaitlyn Laurent is Manhattan royalty. Born and bred into the wealthiest of families, Kaitlyn lives a life full of privileged and expectation.
With her father and stepmother busy socializing, Kaitlyn and her step-brother, Marius, are left basically rearing themselves.
"Inside the fence, cooped up in my enviable Upper Easy Side mansion, I was left to my own devices. My own deeds. My own means of escape and worldly deviances. Not that I had many."
While Kaitlyn is simply wanting to escape her upbringing and impending future in which her father has orchestrated for her, her step-brother Marius is more than willing to exploit his status, surroundings and those around him for his own amusement.
"There is one thing, first and foremost, that you should know about this story: it all started with a game."
Marius offers Kaitlyn freedom, but with Marius there is always a price. If Kaitlyn can seduce her gorgeous Literature teacher she gets Marius' trust fund. If she loses, Marius gets Kaitlyn.
But when Kaitlyn starts out to seduce Mr. William Tennet, she never expected to find a kindred spirit in this conquest.
"I wondered, looking at Mr. Tennet in that millisecond of our eyes meeting, if we were doomed to perpetually search for things we lost somewhere along the way."
Will was meant to be a means to an end. But Kaitlyn starts realizing that this is more than a game and her freedom could come at a cost she is not willing to pay.
I LOVED this book but it's not without it's faults. What drew me to this story was the similarities to one of my favorite movies ever, Cruel Intentions. Because I was so familiar with this movie I was a little bothered by some of the obvious inspirations taken from it.
Even though I took issue with those elements, the writing, characters and plot held me hostage until the early morning hours.
Kaitlyn is an interesting character. Lonely, hollow, bold and predatory, I found Kaitlyn fascinating.
"I knew who the real victim was, and it wasn't me. If there were some fragment of this inevitable explosion that wrote my name in blood across the tracks, I would smear it and cry hearsay. Mr. Tennet was the victim."
Her metamorphosis throughout Star-Crossed was what kept me hooked to the pages. Especially her friendship with outcast, Tyler, brought a layer of depth and likeability to her.
Her relationship with Will was maddening, heartbreaking, and tragic in it's circumstances.
"Are we star-crossed?" I asked quietly, a whisper.
"Yes", he said. "But I would fight against the stars for you."
But what stole the show for me was Marius. He's calculating, cruel and deviant. Everything about Marius that should push you away is what draws you to him.
"Choice,"
Marius said, after pausing for a length of time that seemed slightly too drawn out. As if he were carefully selecting his next move; the piece to slide across a chessboard.
"It's more than just a word. It's an action. It's perhaps the one thing that joins all of us together in this little deviant game."
As you can see, I highlighted A LOT. The writing is gorgeous and flows so well. In fact, this didn't feel like I was reading an indie novel (no offense to indie authors) it just read so elegantly.
While I am knocking a star off for the similarities to Cruel Intentions, I would easily agree this is a 5 star book. Not only was it entertaining but it was provocative and thought-provoking. If this is the writing I can expect from Ms. Lacour I will anxiously awaiting her next story.
4 stars*
**ARC provided in exchange for an honest review**
March 27, 2014
Review to come.
5 beautifully star crossed stars!!
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Are we star-crossed?" I ask quietly, a whisper.
"Yes," he said. "But I would fight against the stars for you."
When I first saw that the author was offering ARCs for Star Crossed, I immediately jumped at the opportunity to snag a copy. It pretty much had me at the title and slowly I finally got around to the synopsis and well you can figure out the rest. I got my copy and I was ecstatic! Star crossed is just another name for forbidden. Forbidden and doesn't end well. Ironically it reminds me of Romeo and Juliet which just so happens to be incorporated into the story.
As you've read the synopsis by now, you'll realize that yes this is a teacher/student romance novel. It takes place in a high school setting but it is in no way a YA novel. Please be warned that this book is for mature readers and it deals with a taboo subject as stated above. If it's something you may not be interested in I suggest you still try the book out. It's very different.
"It all started with a game."
Kaitlyn is a typical girl who nobody understands at a prestigious school full of high societies offspring. She doesn't have any friends and she likes it that way. One night at a masquerade ball, she meets Will, who turns out to be her new teacher at school. Cue her step brother Marius striking up a bet. The bet is to seduce the new teacher by the end of the semester. If she wins, she'll be able to get out of the privileged life she lives, to be free. If she loses, she"ll have to lose her virginity to Marius.
So begins the sensuality and seduction. And oh it was very sensual. I loved the sneaking around, I loved the way the characters talked, and I really loved how well the author made me feel as if I were part of the story. Kaitlyn doesn't act like most eighteen year olds. She has an old soul, which may be why she has never been able to fit in with anybody before.
The supporting cast were also a joy to read. Such as an outsider who goes to the school on scholarship. His name is Tyler, and he is from the wrong side of the tracks. He's not ever good enough because he doesn't swim in money such as his many classmates. Marius is Kaitlyn's step brother, his character is intriguing to say the least.
Will was only meant for a game. A way for Kaitlyn to escape the freedom she craves. But what happens when the stakes become too high? Such as falling in love or worse getting caught?
Star-Crossed is beautifully written. If you're looking for a sweet romance full of fairies and rainbows well you ain't gonna find it here! This is one thrill ride of all things sexy. I mean come on a forbidden romance with a teacher ten years your senior? Yep! You don't have to tell me twice.
A hot whirlwind of a romance with a cruel intentions vibe. Make sure to pick up your copy.
*review copy provided by author in exchange for an honest review.
5 beautifully star crossed stars!!
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Are we star-crossed?" I ask quietly, a whisper.
"Yes," he said. "But I would fight against the stars for you."
When I first saw that the author was offering ARCs for Star Crossed, I immediately jumped at the opportunity to snag a copy. It pretty much had me at the title and slowly I finally got around to the synopsis and well you can figure out the rest. I got my copy and I was ecstatic! Star crossed is just another name for forbidden. Forbidden and doesn't end well. Ironically it reminds me of Romeo and Juliet which just so happens to be incorporated into the story.
As you've read the synopsis by now, you'll realize that yes this is a teacher/student romance novel. It takes place in a high school setting but it is in no way a YA novel. Please be warned that this book is for mature readers and it deals with a taboo subject as stated above. If it's something you may not be interested in I suggest you still try the book out. It's very different.
"It all started with a game."
Kaitlyn is a typical girl who nobody understands at a prestigious school full of high societies offspring. She doesn't have any friends and she likes it that way. One night at a masquerade ball, she meets Will, who turns out to be her new teacher at school. Cue her step brother Marius striking up a bet. The bet is to seduce the new teacher by the end of the semester. If she wins, she'll be able to get out of the privileged life she lives, to be free. If she loses, she"ll have to lose her virginity to Marius.
So begins the sensuality and seduction. And oh it was very sensual. I loved the sneaking around, I loved the way the characters talked, and I really loved how well the author made me feel as if I were part of the story. Kaitlyn doesn't act like most eighteen year olds. She has an old soul, which may be why she has never been able to fit in with anybody before.
The supporting cast were also a joy to read. Such as an outsider who goes to the school on scholarship. His name is Tyler, and he is from the wrong side of the tracks. He's not ever good enough because he doesn't swim in money such as his many classmates. Marius is Kaitlyn's step brother, his character is intriguing to say the least.
Will was only meant for a game. A way for Kaitlyn to escape the freedom she craves. But what happens when the stakes become too high? Such as falling in love or worse getting caught?
Star-Crossed is beautifully written. If you're looking for a sweet romance full of fairies and rainbows well you ain't gonna find it here! This is one thrill ride of all things sexy. I mean come on a forbidden romance with a teacher ten years your senior? Yep! You don't have to tell me twice.
A hot whirlwind of a romance with a cruel intentions vibe. Make sure to pick up your copy.
*review copy provided by author in exchange for an honest review.
Shelved as 'to-be-continued-on-a-later-date'
December 7, 2014***ARC provided by author in exchange for honest review**
April 21, 2014
Stayed up all night to read this, eyes are watery, stomach is rumbling, work is waiting. ABSOLUTELY NO REGRETS!
March 21, 2014
4 Stars for Kaitlyn and Will!
I want to thank Luna for e-mailing me an ARC of Star-crossed! I love waking up to goodies in my e-mail!
Anyway lets begin …
It started with a game - seduce the new teacher.
Eighteen year old Kaitlyn is a senior at Trinity Prep, but she wants more. She's doesn't want to go to Yale, a spot her father basically bought for her, and she certainly doesn't want to take over the families multimillion dollar garment business (hey, she can always pass it on over to me, I'll gladly run it) So her step brother, Marius, givers her a way out. Seduce the new teacher, Mr. Will Tennant and she can have his inheritance to start a new life for herself. if she looses well Marius gets what he's always wanted … her virginity.
So Kaitlyn begins her seduction, a few brush ups and glances, to finding out where he lives and conveniently walking past while he's outside. The attraction is mutual between the two, and neither really mind the age gap, she's eighteen he's twenty-eight. With both of them working on the school play Romeo and Juliet, her Juliet him the director they get to see each other a lot.
Her best and only friend Tyler, who got the role of Romeo is also a huge part of the story, an outcast himself because he's form Brooklyn and not the Upper East Side like herself shows her what it's like to live like without all the money she is accustomed to.
The story whirls into a mess of lies and deceit as the months get closer to graduation. Kaitlyn and Will begin risking it all when they interact behind closed doors at school. Tylers begins to suspect something is up from his best friends' lack of communication and doe-eyes. Marius can't shake Piper, The Headmaster's daughter, off of him either.
The tangled mess the four of them find themselves in is seriously Star-Crossed
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So I really liked this story! It was a great read of teacher/professor romance and the mess is can create. I loved how Kaitlyn and WIll interacted he was quirky and British and completely swoon worthy. Her dad I have mixed feelings about, I kinda liked him than hated him, like okay she doesn't want to go to Yale? So you do that to her? I LOVED Marius, and felt bad for him most of the story, Kaitlyn was a bitch to him, her snotty remarks and comments about him when she was no better herself. Like I kinda wanted them to get together, he genuinely cared about her in his own fucked up way and wanted to do whatever he could to help her out.
Will, Will, Will, I mean who wouldn't want to sleep with their banging hot British teacher with a weird clock obsession. I certainly would, he was sweet and caring and something else you'll need to read about shhh its a secret.
Swooned when he said:
"I'm still learning to love," he said. "I'm stumbling. But I think that's a lot of what this is;ovine, learning. We keep stumbling until we find that one person who is willing to hold our hand and walk with us until we"re strong enough to take the last step on our own."
Tyler, who was a bit to over emotional for me, he cried a lot! Like a lot a lot, sometimes I just wanted to smack him and tell him to toughen up!
Then Marius who's the brooding Ryan Phillippe in every sense of the matter. Twisted, messed up, uses woman just because, has an obsession with his sister, but he's so freaking lovable I was giddy the entire time he was in any scene, and he even has a journal just like Sebastian
I'm just happy he didn't share the same fate as Sebastian and get hit by a car at the end!
Kaitlyn wasn't as cynical as I had thought she was going to be, she wan't annoying either which is always good. I liked her she knew what she wanted and she went after it at all costs
This book was Cruel Intentions, I was waiting for Kaitlyn to unscrew her cross and snot some coke.. She was a lot more straight-laced then my girl Sarah Michelle Gellar though. They were all big into God, had the paintings in the library and the statues throughout the house. Marius kept a journal as well, swam in the pool at random times in a full tux, the usual. I guess its a good thing that Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies huh? cause I really enjoyed the book.
There was a lot of detail in this book, and I wished there had been more dialogue, I love when characters interact with one another and there was a little bit to much of Kaityn in her own head sometimes going off on random tangents.
My ONLY pet peeve with this story was the setting … Kaitlyn lives on the Upper East Side in a mansion … A mansion that has a driveway and an in-ground pool in the backyard with all these gardens … is anyone else seeing where I'm going with this? It would've been one thing if it was a brownstone or they lived in a penthouse on 5th or Park. It was the fact that it was a mansion that messed me up because there isn't enough room in Manhattan to hold a mansion and I sure don't think they're are any in-ground pools in the backyard because you don't get much of a yard if any in the city …
Also it's February when the book begins and the pool boy is shirtless in the backyard skimming the pool in NYC …. They take dips in the pool in early March and April … We didn't go above 25 degrees this year in February in NYC its like the arctic tundra!
I'm usually not bad with setting, but I guess living 10 minutes from the city knowing the winters we get here especially this past winter it was a little hard to look over.
The ending was adorable I loved it, a bit rushed a lot happened in the last chapter but I loved it!
And the rest is rust, and stardust.
I Recommend for all you Cruel Intention fans!
Caio!
I want to thank Luna for e-mailing me an ARC of Star-crossed! I love waking up to goodies in my e-mail!
Anyway lets begin …
It started with a game - seduce the new teacher.
Eighteen year old Kaitlyn is a senior at Trinity Prep, but she wants more. She's doesn't want to go to Yale, a spot her father basically bought for her, and she certainly doesn't want to take over the families multimillion dollar garment business (hey, she can always pass it on over to me, I'll gladly run it) So her step brother, Marius, givers her a way out. Seduce the new teacher, Mr. Will Tennant and she can have his inheritance to start a new life for herself. if she looses well Marius gets what he's always wanted … her virginity.
So Kaitlyn begins her seduction, a few brush ups and glances, to finding out where he lives and conveniently walking past while he's outside. The attraction is mutual between the two, and neither really mind the age gap, she's eighteen he's twenty-eight. With both of them working on the school play Romeo and Juliet, her Juliet him the director they get to see each other a lot.
Her best and only friend Tyler, who got the role of Romeo is also a huge part of the story, an outcast himself because he's form Brooklyn and not the Upper East Side like herself shows her what it's like to live like without all the money she is accustomed to.
The story whirls into a mess of lies and deceit as the months get closer to graduation. Kaitlyn and Will begin risking it all when they interact behind closed doors at school. Tylers begins to suspect something is up from his best friends' lack of communication and doe-eyes. Marius can't shake Piper, The Headmaster's daughter, off of him either.
The tangled mess the four of them find themselves in is seriously Star-Crossed
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So I really liked this story! It was a great read of teacher/professor romance and the mess is can create. I loved how Kaitlyn and WIll interacted he was quirky and British and completely swoon worthy. Her dad I have mixed feelings about, I kinda liked him than hated him, like okay she doesn't want to go to Yale? So you do that to her? I LOVED Marius, and felt bad for him most of the story, Kaitlyn was a bitch to him, her snotty remarks and comments about him when she was no better herself. Like I kinda wanted them to get together, he genuinely cared about her in his own fucked up way and wanted to do whatever he could to help her out.
Will, Will, Will, I mean who wouldn't want to sleep with their banging hot British teacher with a weird clock obsession. I certainly would, he was sweet and caring and something else you'll need to read about shhh its a secret.
Swooned when he said:
"I'm still learning to love," he said. "I'm stumbling. But I think that's a lot of what this is;ovine, learning. We keep stumbling until we find that one person who is willing to hold our hand and walk with us until we"re strong enough to take the last step on our own."
Tyler, who was a bit to over emotional for me, he cried a lot! Like a lot a lot, sometimes I just wanted to smack him and tell him to toughen up!
Then Marius who's the brooding Ryan Phillippe in every sense of the matter. Twisted, messed up, uses woman just because, has an obsession with his sister, but he's so freaking lovable I was giddy the entire time he was in any scene, and he even has a journal just like Sebastian
I'm just happy he didn't share the same fate as Sebastian and get hit by a car at the end!
Kaitlyn wasn't as cynical as I had thought she was going to be, she wan't annoying either which is always good. I liked her she knew what she wanted and she went after it at all costs
This book was Cruel Intentions, I was waiting for Kaitlyn to unscrew her cross and snot some coke.. She was a lot more straight-laced then my girl Sarah Michelle Gellar though. They were all big into God, had the paintings in the library and the statues throughout the house. Marius kept a journal as well, swam in the pool at random times in a full tux, the usual. I guess its a good thing that Cruel Intentions is one of my favorite movies huh? cause I really enjoyed the book.
There was a lot of detail in this book, and I wished there had been more dialogue, I love when characters interact with one another and there was a little bit to much of Kaityn in her own head sometimes going off on random tangents.
My ONLY pet peeve with this story was the setting … Kaitlyn lives on the Upper East Side in a mansion … A mansion that has a driveway and an in-ground pool in the backyard with all these gardens … is anyone else seeing where I'm going with this? It would've been one thing if it was a brownstone or they lived in a penthouse on 5th or Park. It was the fact that it was a mansion that messed me up because there isn't enough room in Manhattan to hold a mansion and I sure don't think they're are any in-ground pools in the backyard because you don't get much of a yard if any in the city …
Also it's February when the book begins and the pool boy is shirtless in the backyard skimming the pool in NYC …. They take dips in the pool in early March and April … We didn't go above 25 degrees this year in February in NYC its like the arctic tundra!
I'm usually not bad with setting, but I guess living 10 minutes from the city knowing the winters we get here especially this past winter it was a little hard to look over.
The ending was adorable I loved it, a bit rushed a lot happened in the last chapter but I loved it!
And the rest is rust, and stardust.
I Recommend for all you Cruel Intention fans!
Caio!
April 9, 2014
I should say before anything else that I've never believed in love at first sight. But when I first saw him, something stirred inside of me. Immediate, utterly insufferable.
Completely incalculable.
If I read a books synopsis and there is any mention of a student/teacher relationship, you can bet that I'm going to read it. When I first came across Star-Crossed, it had exactly that, but with the added enticement of a possible relationship with a step brother. Yeah, I'm a huge sucker for anything that's forbidden.
I had once claimed to not have a heart - to not feel things as those around me did.
Now it was all coming out at once; as if someone had sliced open my chest and extended my literal heart for the world to watch beating.
Luna Lacour says she loves classic literature and it shows in her writing. It is extremely lyrical. It's also very descriptive. A lot of the story is spent inside Kaitlyn's head, which wasn't always a great place to be. She was quite a solitary person and she carries a fair amount of baggage, so it wasn't all sunshine and rainbows in there. Normally when you read about a girl who comes from money, they are surrounded by friends, but that wasn't the case with Kaitlyn. There are no real friends to speak of. Until Tyler comes along. At first glance they are such opposites, but they find something in each other that they both need, and a fantastic friendship develops. I really loved Tyler. He's the type of friend that anyone would be lucky to have.
"It's a shameful thing you know, touching a student," he added. "I swear, I've never had these thoughts before. I was a proper well-intentioned man before I first saw you."
The author has forever in my mind stamped the picture of James Franco as Will. Him and his gorgeous smile are what I see when I picture Will and, if for nothing more than that, I loved him. But he was definitely more than that mental picture. To me, he came across as strong but he also had an underlying vulnerability that I couldn't help but be attracted to. At times he seemed much younger than his age, but I think that was because of that vulnerability.
Then there was Marius. I had a bit of a love/hate relationship with him going on. I really didn't understand him and his motives until much later in the book, where he captured my attention a lot more.
There wasn't a lot of the story that was conducted in a strict learning environment so for the most part, I actually forgot that the relationship taking place before me was between a teacher and his student. Yes, there were portions of the book conducted in school, but Will didn't come across as one of those teachers standing at the front of the classroom, but more of a get in with the students type of teacher.
If I had to pick something that I would have liked done differently, it would have been the beginnings of the relationship between Kaitlyn and Will. One of the things that I love about this type of romance is how forbidden it is and I felt that Will gave in much too easily. There wasn't really a lot of wrestling with their feelings or the ethics of it all. They wanted, so they took. It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story though. I just would have liked to see more of that initial struggle.
All in all, Star-Crossed was a great debut and I will definitely be reading more of Luna Lacour's writing in the future.
I had to have him, and I had to win. I had to win, but I had to have him.
4/5 Will Tennant Stars
Completely incalculable.
If I read a books synopsis and there is any mention of a student/teacher relationship, you can bet that I'm going to read it. When I first came across Star-Crossed, it had exactly that, but with the added enticement of a possible relationship with a step brother. Yeah, I'm a huge sucker for anything that's forbidden.
I had once claimed to not have a heart - to not feel things as those around me did.
Now it was all coming out at once; as if someone had sliced open my chest and extended my literal heart for the world to watch beating.
Luna Lacour says she loves classic literature and it shows in her writing. It is extremely lyrical. It's also very descriptive. A lot of the story is spent inside Kaitlyn's head, which wasn't always a great place to be. She was quite a solitary person and she carries a fair amount of baggage, so it wasn't all sunshine and rainbows in there. Normally when you read about a girl who comes from money, they are surrounded by friends, but that wasn't the case with Kaitlyn. There are no real friends to speak of. Until Tyler comes along. At first glance they are such opposites, but they find something in each other that they both need, and a fantastic friendship develops. I really loved Tyler. He's the type of friend that anyone would be lucky to have.
"It's a shameful thing you know, touching a student," he added. "I swear, I've never had these thoughts before. I was a proper well-intentioned man before I first saw you."
The author has forever in my mind stamped the picture of James Franco as Will. Him and his gorgeous smile are what I see when I picture Will and, if for nothing more than that, I loved him. But he was definitely more than that mental picture. To me, he came across as strong but he also had an underlying vulnerability that I couldn't help but be attracted to. At times he seemed much younger than his age, but I think that was because of that vulnerability.
Then there was Marius. I had a bit of a love/hate relationship with him going on. I really didn't understand him and his motives until much later in the book, where he captured my attention a lot more.
There wasn't a lot of the story that was conducted in a strict learning environment so for the most part, I actually forgot that the relationship taking place before me was between a teacher and his student. Yes, there were portions of the book conducted in school, but Will didn't come across as one of those teachers standing at the front of the classroom, but more of a get in with the students type of teacher.
If I had to pick something that I would have liked done differently, it would have been the beginnings of the relationship between Kaitlyn and Will. One of the things that I love about this type of romance is how forbidden it is and I felt that Will gave in much too easily. There wasn't really a lot of wrestling with their feelings or the ethics of it all. They wanted, so they took. It didn't take away from my enjoyment of the story though. I just would have liked to see more of that initial struggle.
All in all, Star-Crossed was a great debut and I will definitely be reading more of Luna Lacour's writing in the future.
I had to have him, and I had to win. I had to win, but I had to have him.
4/5 Will Tennant Stars
June 8, 2014
L o l.
This was one of those books where I just hated all the characters. Except one--Marius. He was a douchebag of the highest order, yes, but at least he was interesting. Also, I liked Tyler, but he was boring.
As was Will. And Kaitlyn. And the stupid insta-lust.
Okay, I get it: the teacher/student trope is a kink, and people like it. But how can you expect me to like a relationship between two people so poorly characterized?
Kaitlyn is spoiled rich; numb to her numerous Manhattan-socialite privileges; and exceedingly ungrateful. Lacour does not help her own cause by; writing; like; this; semicolon;;;;;;. And, also, these commas, also, did not present, much gratification, to this sole reader, nor did the metaphors, like a stale hot dog eaten under, the pale; moonlight of late; autumn.
I mean, seriously. Love? Don't tell me Kaitlyn fell in love with Will. It truly was just lust on both their parts. What would've been interesting (and I can't believe I'm saying this) is a truly fleshed out love triangle/square between Will, Marius, Kaitlyn, and Tyler. I would've been hooked on that. But nope, Kaitlyn falls in love with the hot, older teacher, and it's just stupid all throughout. Jesus. This review is also horrible, but this book was horrible, so it don't matter.
This was one of those books where I just hated all the characters. Except one--Marius. He was a douchebag of the highest order, yes, but at least he was interesting. Also, I liked Tyler, but he was boring.
As was Will. And Kaitlyn. And the stupid insta-lust.
Okay, I get it: the teacher/student trope is a kink, and people like it. But how can you expect me to like a relationship between two people so poorly characterized?
Kaitlyn is spoiled rich; numb to her numerous Manhattan-socialite privileges; and exceedingly ungrateful. Lacour does not help her own cause by; writing; like; this; semicolon;;;;;;. And, also, these commas, also, did not present, much gratification, to this sole reader, nor did the metaphors, like a stale hot dog eaten under, the pale; moonlight of late; autumn.
I mean, seriously. Love? Don't tell me Kaitlyn fell in love with Will. It truly was just lust on both their parts. What would've been interesting (and I can't believe I'm saying this) is a truly fleshed out love triangle/square between Will, Marius, Kaitlyn, and Tyler. I would've been hooked on that. But nope, Kaitlyn falls in love with the hot, older teacher, and it's just stupid all throughout. Jesus. This review is also horrible, but this book was horrible, so it don't matter.
Shelved as 'did-not-finish'
December 29, 2014Sadly, it was not good.
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Before reading:
Another student teacher novel?
But damn, I can't help it. This better be good.
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Before reading:
Another student teacher novel?
But damn, I can't help it. This better be good.
April 5, 2017
This was a gripping quick and easy read. It was a romantic book with the premise similar to the 'Cruel Intentions' film based on a dare between two step siblings.
The main character is Kaitlin, a teenage girl who has a very rich upbrining, wanting for no material goods but perhaps lost out on family time with her father a little. Her father remarries and she now also has to put up with her step-brother Marius, a sex crazed womaniser who has slept with just about all the females in his year. When Kaitlin meets a guy at a party she has no idea he is going to be her teacher, then she auditions to be in the school play (Romeo & Juliet) and he is the teacher in charge. Her step brother notices the attraction between them and makes a dare with his sister, she has to sleep with the teacher or he gets to sleep with her.
There are a few noteworthy secondary characters, for me these were Tyler and Will. Tyler is a fellow classmate, not as financially well off as Kaitlin but close to his mother, he's had a crush on Kaitlin all through school and who is in the play so gets to know her better and be a friend to her. Will is the teacher that Kaitlin falls for and he falls for her despite the age gap and that he could loose his job.
The storyline starts off similar to 'Cruel Intentions' but as the story progresses towards the end it is more of a coming of age what Kaitlin is going to do with her life thing. The pacing was good and I loved the completion I felt at the end of reading the book, I'm glad it is a one off book as it was perfectly finished.
4 stars a great read
The main character is Kaitlin, a teenage girl who has a very rich upbrining, wanting for no material goods but perhaps lost out on family time with her father a little. Her father remarries and she now also has to put up with her step-brother Marius, a sex crazed womaniser who has slept with just about all the females in his year. When Kaitlin meets a guy at a party she has no idea he is going to be her teacher, then she auditions to be in the school play (Romeo & Juliet) and he is the teacher in charge. Her step brother notices the attraction between them and makes a dare with his sister, she has to sleep with the teacher or he gets to sleep with her.
There are a few noteworthy secondary characters, for me these were Tyler and Will. Tyler is a fellow classmate, not as financially well off as Kaitlin but close to his mother, he's had a crush on Kaitlin all through school and who is in the play so gets to know her better and be a friend to her. Will is the teacher that Kaitlin falls for and he falls for her despite the age gap and that he could loose his job.
The storyline starts off similar to 'Cruel Intentions' but as the story progresses towards the end it is more of a coming of age what Kaitlin is going to do with her life thing. The pacing was good and I loved the completion I felt at the end of reading the book, I'm glad it is a one off book as it was perfectly finished.
4 stars a great read
April 24, 2018
This was a fantastic read. The story has a Cruel Intentions vibe as Kaitlyn Laurent and her step-brother, Marius St. Vincent, make a bet for her to seduce the new classic literature and drama teacher, Mr. William Tennant. The prize at stake is Kaitlyn's virginity, which made me think of Cruel Intentions again. However, I was not expecting this story to pull me in as much as it did. I think the characters have a lot to do with that. The story was beautifully written, and I really loved the angst in the book. I was really impressed with the characters in this story.
Kaitlyn Laurent was an amazing heroine. She is the female counterpart of Sebastian Valmont from the film Cruel Intentions. She wants make her own decisions, but is unable to do so as her father has planned out every detail of her life. Throughout the book, her journey of self-discovery was beautiful. She really grew as a character and it made her story more interesting just like Sebastian did during the movie Cruel Intentions. I found her character to be strong, determined, and smart.
Marius St. Vincent is Kaitlyn's step-brother. I really love the friendship that he and Kaitlyn share, although he wants their relationship to grow. In this book, I saw how vulnerable he truly is and it is interesting to see why he keeps seducing women then leaving them because they do not compare to Kaitlyn. I found his character to be flawed, loyal, vulnerable, intense and ruthless.
William Tennant is Kaitlyn's new classic literature and drama teacher. He is also the main love interest for Kaitlyn. He has a lot of secrets from his past. I love the attraction that he and Kaitlyn have for each other. He is admired by his students. I mean I fell in love with him and I thought it was quite interesting to see him fight his attraction for her. I found his character to be charming, lovable, and smart.
Tyler Dawson is Kaitlyn's friend. He is attending the school on a scholarship and is usually made fun of because of that fact. He gets a role in the theatre production with Kaitlyn. They became friends. However, his feelings for her grow. I thought his loyalty and friendship towards Kaitlyn was really sweet. He is another character that I loved. I found his character to be lovable, loyal, smart, and ambitious.
The ending of the story was perfect. I thought it was great that Kaitlyn and Will got their HEA. Fans of Cruel Intentions movie, I recommend this book to you. It is interesting to see the similarities and the differences between the movie and this book. Also, fans of student-teacher romance books, I would recommend this book to you. I cannot wait to read more books by this author. Overall, an amazing read.
Kaitlyn Laurent was an amazing heroine. She is the female counterpart of Sebastian Valmont from the film Cruel Intentions. She wants make her own decisions, but is unable to do so as her father has planned out every detail of her life. Throughout the book, her journey of self-discovery was beautiful. She really grew as a character and it made her story more interesting just like Sebastian did during the movie Cruel Intentions. I found her character to be strong, determined, and smart.
Marius St. Vincent is Kaitlyn's step-brother. I really love the friendship that he and Kaitlyn share, although he wants their relationship to grow. In this book, I saw how vulnerable he truly is and it is interesting to see why he keeps seducing women then leaving them because they do not compare to Kaitlyn. I found his character to be flawed, loyal, vulnerable, intense and ruthless.
William Tennant is Kaitlyn's new classic literature and drama teacher. He is also the main love interest for Kaitlyn. He has a lot of secrets from his past. I love the attraction that he and Kaitlyn have for each other. He is admired by his students. I mean I fell in love with him and I thought it was quite interesting to see him fight his attraction for her. I found his character to be charming, lovable, and smart.
Tyler Dawson is Kaitlyn's friend. He is attending the school on a scholarship and is usually made fun of because of that fact. He gets a role in the theatre production with Kaitlyn. They became friends. However, his feelings for her grow. I thought his loyalty and friendship towards Kaitlyn was really sweet. He is another character that I loved. I found his character to be lovable, loyal, smart, and ambitious.
The ending of the story was perfect. I thought it was great that Kaitlyn and Will got their HEA. Fans of Cruel Intentions movie, I recommend this book to you. It is interesting to see the similarities and the differences between the movie and this book. Also, fans of student-teacher romance books, I would recommend this book to you. I cannot wait to read more books by this author. Overall, an amazing read.
March 19, 2014
There are very few debut authors that bring a book to life and make readers really invested in the character's life and end their story with a BANG. Author Luna is one of them!
I read this book in less than 5 hrs, which truthfully, I can remember doing for only a handful of authors.
Kait's story ensnared me from page one and as I continued to know of it, I couldn't turn the pages fast enough!
The things I loved about the book:
Luna does such a wonderful job of creating depth to her characters that by the end I felt like I knew Kait my entire life!
The steam factor between Mr. Tenant and Kait was just perfect.
The secondary characters were built with just the perfect level of involvement... Tyler, Marius, and Piper
The last 20% or so I wanted to punch, kick, scream and hug my kindle, because I didn't know if I would get a happily ever after or not! The emotional ride in that last 5th of the book was BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!
Things I didn't like?
I want MORE of Marius! I know there's something more than what Kait's story showed us and I want to know his side if the story! I REALLY hope Luna will write his story... #obviousteamMariusfan
Overall, if you're a fan of perfect mix of star-cross, smexy, and angst rooting for the MC for a happily ever after, YOU MUST READ THIS BOOK!
I read this book in less than 5 hrs, which truthfully, I can remember doing for only a handful of authors.
Kait's story ensnared me from page one and as I continued to know of it, I couldn't turn the pages fast enough!
The things I loved about the book:
Luna does such a wonderful job of creating depth to her characters that by the end I felt like I knew Kait my entire life!
The steam factor between Mr. Tenant and Kait was just perfect.
The secondary characters were built with just the perfect level of involvement... Tyler, Marius, and Piper
The last 20% or so I wanted to punch, kick, scream and hug my kindle, because I didn't know if I would get a happily ever after or not! The emotional ride in that last 5th of the book was BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!
Things I didn't like?
I want MORE of Marius! I know there's something more than what Kait's story showed us and I want to know his side if the story! I REALLY hope Luna will write his story... #obviousteamMariusfan
Overall, if you're a fan of perfect mix of star-cross, smexy, and angst rooting for the MC for a happily ever after, YOU MUST READ THIS BOOK!
April 5, 2016
LUNA WHAT HAVE DONE TO ME?!! I'M ABSOLUTE EMOTIONAL MESS AFTER I FINISHED THIS! This book definitely needs more recognition! Luna does a spectacular job in ripping my heart out for each and every character. I loved how luna made all the characters uniquely different and showed them struggling in thier worlds while also all have this similar brokenness about them. One of the most worthy book hangovers I've had this year.
August 25, 2015
3.5 stars
♥ Full review can be found on YouTube here: Star-Crossed by Luna Lacour
♥ Full review can be found on YouTube here: Star-Crossed by Luna Lacour
July 20, 2015
DNF 59%
April 1, 2014
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4.5 stars
Star-Crossed had me intrigued from the very beginning. It was hard to put down. But I have to say... The last 30% of the story definitely amped it up and had me on the edge of my seat! What happened to the characters almost felt like a never-ending train-wreck. I could not look away, nor could I help but to get emotional. I was extremely anxious to know how Kaitlyn's story would end, so props to the author Luna Lacour for keeping me guessing all the way to the final lines of the book.
The story focused on eighteen-year-old Kaitlyn Laurent, who no longer wanted to live the life her wealthy and out-of-touch father already planned out for her and who becomes immersed in a game to seduce her teacher Mr. Tennant. Kaitlyn was an interesting character. I couldn't relate to her life or her choices, and I thought she sometimes came off as cold and distant. However, she grew on me. I understood her reasoning behind some of the reckless decisions she made. Her unhappiness with the way her life was going didn't cause me to roll my eyes or make me wish she would be happy that she at least had money. I just ended up feeling immense sympathy for her and hoped things would work out for her, even though it seemed impossible.
The males in Kaitlyn's life fascinated me as well. Her stepbrother Marius stood out to me a lot. He was the one who started the game, the bet, between himself and Kaitlyn. There were times I wanted to know more about him and times I wanted to shake him. It wasn't easy figuring him out, and his motives weren't clear to me till the last part of the story. I just felt really bad for him by the end, and it made me wonder how differently things would have been had he not hid behind all the games. Tyler was another stand out. He was a loner at school because of his status and somehow became best friends with Kaitlyn during their final semester. I loved how normal he seemed compared to everyone else. He was sweet, had morals, and viewed the world in an entirely different way compared to the all rich kids at school. I'm so happy with his outcome and glad Kaitlyn had him by her side.
Last, but not least: Will Tennant. He was the new literature teacher at school and the one Kaitlyn had to seduce in order to win the bet (the prize being Marius's trust fund money) and escape the life she no longer wanted. I really liked Will. He was kind, patient, and intelligent. There was also a bit of mystery about him, and it didn't hurt that he was hot and British. I felt him and Kaitlyn were a perfect match. They both seemed lost and shared an immediate connection that was hard to ignore. As for the bet, it became really hard for Kaitlyn to go through with, especially once she realized how deep her feelings were for Will. Keeping their student/teacher relationship a secret from everyone was hard enough, and if Will found out about the bet, Kaitlyn knew everything would come crashing down. It did give the story excitement, but at the same time, it gave me much anxiety because all I wanted was for them to be happy and together.
Star-Crossed was about a girl who wanted to live her life the way she wanted to with the man she loved but got caught up in all the secrets and lies. It was alluring and at times thrilling and not the usual new adult read. I don't want to spoil the ending, but I will say that it was unexpected and fitting and left me breathless. Star-Crossed was a wonderful debut novel by Luna Lacour, and I'm looking forward to reading what she writes next!
March 15, 2017
*MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS!!*
Wow, this book was just.. weird.. What was the plot? I mean, seducing on the teacher, fine, but was that it? Since, after like 5 chapters or something, the teacher and the student were already making out. Not long after that, they gave each other a orgasm. (Though they did not f*ck yet.) I had expected more from this, a hell of a lot more, that is. Marius was awesome, a bad-boy, man whore.. So i had expected something to happen between him and Kait, but noooo. So not much happened in this book, it was pretty much boring.
Kaitlyn Laurent was a complete spoiled brat, no matter what you think. She had her comments, and i liked her in the beginning, but then it just became way too much. There's one thing hiding yourself in front of others, like not showing the real you, but the way Luna wrote Kaitlyn was just not right, because not once did i feel connected to Kait. She was not just closed off to the world, but to the readers as well. And Kait, there's alot of ways to keep people at bay, but there's a difference between being closed off and being mean. + You were so goddamn selfish!
Mr. 'Will' Tennant was so.. what is the right word.. weak? I mean, come on, you know you're really good looking with a british accent and gorgeous eyes, so of course students will flirt and try to get in you're pants, yet at the first try from Kaitlyn you where a goner/lost. 28 years old, yet for me, he was like 16 in my head. And come on, you even let the 18 year old girl dominate you?! Also, there was a lot of sobbing from the characters too. Too much actually, for my taste. It all was just.. wrong.
This book really did have potential, but it was just not for me, perhaps other will like it though :) Do i recommend it? To be honest, no, but everyone has their own opinions and tastes, so it's completely up to you whenever you want to give it a chance or not. I, for one, think this was a waste of my time. :(
Rate: 2 disappointed stars.
Wow, this book was just.. weird.. What was the plot? I mean, seducing on the teacher, fine, but was that it? Since, after like 5 chapters or something, the teacher and the student were already making out. Not long after that, they gave each other a orgasm. (Though they did not f*ck yet.) I had expected more from this, a hell of a lot more, that is. Marius was awesome, a bad-boy, man whore.. So i had expected something to happen between him and Kait, but noooo. So not much happened in this book, it was pretty much boring.
Kaitlyn Laurent was a complete spoiled brat, no matter what you think. She had her comments, and i liked her in the beginning, but then it just became way too much. There's one thing hiding yourself in front of others, like not showing the real you, but the way Luna wrote Kaitlyn was just not right, because not once did i feel connected to Kait. She was not just closed off to the world, but to the readers as well. And Kait, there's alot of ways to keep people at bay, but there's a difference between being closed off and being mean. + You were so goddamn selfish!
Mr. 'Will' Tennant was so.. what is the right word.. weak? I mean, come on, you know you're really good looking with a british accent and gorgeous eyes, so of course students will flirt and try to get in you're pants, yet at the first try from Kaitlyn you where a goner/lost. 28 years old, yet for me, he was like 16 in my head. And come on, you even let the 18 year old girl dominate you?! Also, there was a lot of sobbing from the characters too. Too much actually, for my taste. It all was just.. wrong.
This book really did have potential, but it was just not for me, perhaps other will like it though :) Do i recommend it? To be honest, no, but everyone has their own opinions and tastes, so it's completely up to you whenever you want to give it a chance or not. I, for one, think this was a waste of my time. :(
Rate: 2 disappointed stars.
April 28, 2014
Eighteen year-old (and that does come into play later) Kaitlyn Laurent lives a rich but deeply unfufilling life in the Upper East Side with her father, vapid step-mother, and step-brother Marius. Heir to a chain of clothing stores, she has a bought spot waiting for her at Yale in the fall. Her last semester at Trinity Prep is going well until the new young and attractive English/Drama teacher comes in. This starts an epic bet between siblings that nobody will walk away from unscathed.
Okay, I guess this is the time frame where I read books with touchy subjects. I would recommend not picking this up if you are not cool with student/teacher relationships, albeit with consenual adults over the age of eighteen.
There are some awesome mock-ups of character inspirations. The author even throws in that her physical inspiration for Mr. Tennant was James Franco. I watch far too much Doctor Who, so anyone described as gorgeous and with an English accent who happens to have the last name Tennant becomes this man:
I'm conflicted about this book. The writing style was rich and descriptive. It had a bit of a Cruel Intentions vibe. I was pleased with how it navigated a tricky subject. An interesting turn of events that Kaityln is more of the aggressor. And something Mr. Tennant says towards the end was surprising.
The bet was the catylist for everything, but I was left unfufilled with how it ended. Kaitlyn was not my favorite, but I respected a little her growing up process throughout the book and to the end. One of the things that annoyed me the most was the constant description of Mr. Tennant as her teacher. After the first few times I felt like it was overkill. I get that your relationship is taboo.
*This review was provided in exchange for an ARC from the author.*
Okay, I guess this is the time frame where I read books with touchy subjects. I would recommend not picking this up if you are not cool with student/teacher relationships, albeit with consenual adults over the age of eighteen.
There are some awesome mock-ups of character inspirations. The author even throws in that her physical inspiration for Mr. Tennant was James Franco. I watch far too much Doctor Who, so anyone described as gorgeous and with an English accent who happens to have the last name Tennant becomes this man:
I'm conflicted about this book. The writing style was rich and descriptive. It had a bit of a Cruel Intentions vibe. I was pleased with how it navigated a tricky subject. An interesting turn of events that Kaityln is more of the aggressor. And something Mr. Tennant says towards the end was surprising.
The bet was the catylist for everything, but I was left unfufilled with how it ended. Kaitlyn was not my favorite, but I respected a little her growing up process throughout the book and to the end. One of the things that annoyed me the most was the constant description of Mr. Tennant as her teacher. After the first few times I felt like it was overkill. I get that your relationship is taboo.
*This review was provided in exchange for an ARC from the author.*
January 1, 2015
I bought Star Crossed because it was different from what I usually read. A student/teacher relationship that I have only read in one other book. The blurb intrigued me because the whole situation started with a bet. Reminding me of the movie Cruel Intentions with some of the same scenes just different people. There was also a hint of the show Pretty Little Liars with the girl and teacher getting together and trying not to get caught.
I can't quite put my finger on why but I was never truly invested in the book. I never bonded with the characters and everything that happened between Kaitlyn and her teacher just didn't seem real or even remotely passionate. The whole story seemed very drawn out and even the bet/game of seduction seemed pretty blah. I do hope other readers enjoy Star Crossed but sadly it just wasn't for me.
I can't quite put my finger on why but I was never truly invested in the book. I never bonded with the characters and everything that happened between Kaitlyn and her teacher just didn't seem real or even remotely passionate. The whole story seemed very drawn out and even the bet/game of seduction seemed pretty blah. I do hope other readers enjoy Star Crossed but sadly it just wasn't for me.
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