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The Rules of Burken
Twenty-four-year-old Charlotte Stahl would do anything for her older brother, Ian. After all, he’d done everything for her growing up.
He played Burken with her—a hide-and-seek game they made up as kids.
He comforted her when their mom deserted them.
He raised her when their dad went to prison for murder.
To Charlotte, Ian is the only reason she’s still alive—he’s her rock. So when Ian asks her to play Burken in the isolated woods of Cadillac, Michigan, Charlotte feels she could use the nostalgia and agrees. Besides, they haven’t played this game since childhood. Burken—it’s the one thing that never changes …
…until Ian threatens to kill her in the middle of the game.
More than the rules have changed as Brother turns to Predator, Sister turns to Prey, and she’s navigating the forests of Northern Michigan on foot with nothing but the clothes—and a target—on her back.
If Charlotte wants to stay alive, she knows she has to untangle the web of her haunting past to find out where things went wrong, and at what point she lost sight of reality. With no other choice but to reopen old wounds—and with Ian hot on her trail—Charlotte learns that sometimes evil has to manifest in order for good to succeed. Which makes her wonder…
Is Ian really a monster? Or her savior?
He played Burken with her—a hide-and-seek game they made up as kids.
He comforted her when their mom deserted them.
He raised her when their dad went to prison for murder.
To Charlotte, Ian is the only reason she’s still alive—he’s her rock. So when Ian asks her to play Burken in the isolated woods of Cadillac, Michigan, Charlotte feels she could use the nostalgia and agrees. Besides, they haven’t played this game since childhood. Burken—it’s the one thing that never changes …
…until Ian threatens to kill her in the middle of the game.
More than the rules have changed as Brother turns to Predator, Sister turns to Prey, and she’s navigating the forests of Northern Michigan on foot with nothing but the clothes—and a target—on her back.
If Charlotte wants to stay alive, she knows she has to untangle the web of her haunting past to find out where things went wrong, and at what point she lost sight of reality. With no other choice but to reopen old wounds—and with Ian hot on her trail—Charlotte learns that sometimes evil has to manifest in order for good to succeed. Which makes her wonder…
Is Ian really a monster? Or her savior?
324 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 11, 2019
About the author
Traci Finlay
5 books395 followersTraci Finlay grew up in the Midwest and transplanted to Florida for college. She received a bachelor’s degree in Communication Arts with a minor in English, met and married the love of her life and moved to Miami, where she currently lives with her husband, two sons, and two smart-mouthed dogs.
Growing up, she loved reading books, but had a particular passion for mysteries. Throughout her adulthood, she’s taken many writing courses and written three psychological thrillers she plans to publish soon.
Growing up, she loved reading books, but had a particular passion for mysteries. Throughout her adulthood, she’s taken many writing courses and written three psychological thrillers she plans to publish soon.
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July 22, 2019
I cannot explain the feeling of heavenly bliss I feel when my Dark Loving heart stumbles upon an author who isn't shy of staining her fingers Black with writing a story so dark, it should be cateogarised as "50 shades of Black". Having peeked into her dark, psycho brain, I seriously wanna camp inside it! This being her first book, I can already see her career graph on the up and up from now on!! Her extensive and meticulous research shows in her finely detailed scene settings. All the towns, cities and locations are vividly described. Very smart language with full use of idioms and ironies, she gives each character befitting vocabulary. Sarcasm is used as a coping mechanism with Stahls and sharp scathing language is given to Swarings. Very aptly decorated, it was such a joy to read the embellished words
On the other hand, the plot left me completely speechless. At loss for words to describe the helplessness and vindication that I felt for myself as a reader when running with Charlotte's life throughout the book.
The mood is full of dread and thumping danger. I could feel the claw after me, almost touching my clothes, it's fingers brushing my hair, waiting to tackle me.
“I see you, Little Spider.”
5 words......set my pulse racing full speed like a drumbeat at a sacrificial fire. It's eerie enough to give you goosebumps and your feet will itch to run.
“The Rules of Burken.
Don’t let me catch you. Because if I catch you, I will kill you.”
That's the game Ian Stahl traps his little sister- Charlotte Stahl in.
He's the predator, she's the prey.
He's the manipulator, she's the victim
Traci truly and utterly redefines the term
“Stockholm Syndrome
Alternating between abusive rage and loving gestures?
An addictive cycle?
A hopelessness in the victim?
What does that sound like to you?”
she's legit Einstein of Mindfuckery. She changes the face of danger in every chapter. Charlotte runs from her brother, then her father, then her mother, then Jack, then herself & then the truth.
"the truth will set you free, but sometimes … you have to set yourself free from the truth.”
Very unusual, complex story of siblings who are tied up in debilitating co-dependency to an extent that it mutates their personalities.
I use the term siblings in plural cause there's two sets and they are dangerously similar and different from each other in power play
While Ian has -God Complex, Jack has Moses Complex.
That's the best analogy I can come up with
“I guess that’s what happens when brothers have to raise little sisters when they’re still children themselves? If you think about it, that’s a lot of stress for them."
This book NEEDS to be read acutely, you cannot rush through it at all. Every Chapter is steeped in sinister energy, there's no redemption anywhere.
Evil is jet black, all characters are stained grey, you'll have to hunt for pure goodness.
If somebody asked me how was the story, what is it about, I wouldn't even know how to explain it to them. It's a maze of convoluted relationships and it will require your unwavering attention to understand it. It's subtle in clues and glaring in consequences but you have to read each word carefully.
"It’s amazing what the human body is capable of when it’s faced with death."
I guess Good and Evil are like two dogs Fighting for supremacy in your souly, It all depends on who you feed the most!!
I'm as stumped as I was at the beginning of the story. I couldn't afford to put this book down for more than a few minutes, the Whodunits and Howdunits and Whydunits kept pulling me towards this book like a magnet. It's heinous at most places, sickening at few and an absolute pulse pounder at all times. Completely absorbing and engaging..a virtual feast for Dark Lovers.
Tbh at one point the choppy flow had me deducting half a star but the end...Omg THE END JUST pushed my heart over the edge of the cliff..
5 Spider Stars for Folie à Deux -Madness shared by two
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On the other hand, the plot left me completely speechless. At loss for words to describe the helplessness and vindication that I felt for myself as a reader when running with Charlotte's life throughout the book.
The mood is full of dread and thumping danger. I could feel the claw after me, almost touching my clothes, it's fingers brushing my hair, waiting to tackle me.
“I see you, Little Spider.”
5 words......set my pulse racing full speed like a drumbeat at a sacrificial fire. It's eerie enough to give you goosebumps and your feet will itch to run.
“The Rules of Burken.
Don’t let me catch you. Because if I catch you, I will kill you.”
That's the game Ian Stahl traps his little sister- Charlotte Stahl in.
He's the predator, she's the prey.
He's the manipulator, she's the victim
Traci truly and utterly redefines the term
“Stockholm Syndrome
Alternating between abusive rage and loving gestures?
An addictive cycle?
A hopelessness in the victim?
What does that sound like to you?”
she's legit Einstein of Mindfuckery. She changes the face of danger in every chapter. Charlotte runs from her brother, then her father, then her mother, then Jack, then herself & then the truth.
"the truth will set you free, but sometimes … you have to set yourself free from the truth.”
Very unusual, complex story of siblings who are tied up in debilitating co-dependency to an extent that it mutates their personalities.
I use the term siblings in plural cause there's two sets and they are dangerously similar and different from each other in power play
While Ian has -God Complex, Jack has Moses Complex.
That's the best analogy I can come up with
“I guess that’s what happens when brothers have to raise little sisters when they’re still children themselves? If you think about it, that’s a lot of stress for them."
This book NEEDS to be read acutely, you cannot rush through it at all. Every Chapter is steeped in sinister energy, there's no redemption anywhere.
Evil is jet black, all characters are stained grey, you'll have to hunt for pure goodness.
If somebody asked me how was the story, what is it about, I wouldn't even know how to explain it to them. It's a maze of convoluted relationships and it will require your unwavering attention to understand it. It's subtle in clues and glaring in consequences but you have to read each word carefully.
"It’s amazing what the human body is capable of when it’s faced with death."
I guess Good and Evil are like two dogs Fighting for supremacy in your souly, It all depends on who you feed the most!!
I'm as stumped as I was at the beginning of the story. I couldn't afford to put this book down for more than a few minutes, the Whodunits and Howdunits and Whydunits kept pulling me towards this book like a magnet. It's heinous at most places, sickening at few and an absolute pulse pounder at all times. Completely absorbing and engaging..a virtual feast for Dark Lovers.
Tbh at one point the choppy flow had me deducting half a star but the end...Omg THE END JUST pushed my heart over the edge of the cliff..
5 Spider Stars for Folie à Deux -Madness shared by two
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April 11, 2019
4.5 Stars
Charlotte Stahl grew up idolizing her big brother and knew she could always count on him, especially given her family circumstances. Yet, on the day of her brother’s birthday, the stakes are raised as she’s challenged to a childhood game of Burken and Charlotte doesn’t have any choice but to run and hide.
Told solely from Charlotte’s perspective, it quickly becomes apparent that her options are rather limited. With the immediate shock of what’s happening to her, the plot pace remains swift as memories from the past are alternated with the present. As Charlotte’s life unfolds, she fights against what she‘s always known.
While this book has all the good elements of a solid thriller, I was also intrigued as to how these characters experienced trauma. Throughout reading, I had theories, and though some revelations weren’t a complete surprise, these characters remained true to their core. There were times when I wanted to scream some sense into Charlotte, but the depth of her issues was glaring. Overall, I was glued to this book and couldn’t wait to read the final page.
The Rules of Burken is about manipulation and choices. This book will appeal to those who enjoy thrillers and the descent into moral wickedness.
*An ARC was provided in exchange for an honest review.*
*This was a (F)BR with Twinsie Hawkey!*
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Charlotte Stahl grew up idolizing her big brother and knew she could always count on him, especially given her family circumstances. Yet, on the day of her brother’s birthday, the stakes are raised as she’s challenged to a childhood game of Burken and Charlotte doesn’t have any choice but to run and hide.
“His grip on my arm tightens, and he pulls me closer until his breath hits my ear. “Don’t let me catch you.”
Told solely from Charlotte’s perspective, it quickly becomes apparent that her options are rather limited. With the immediate shock of what’s happening to her, the plot pace remains swift as memories from the past are alternated with the present. As Charlotte’s life unfolds, she fights against what she‘s always known.
“You’d be surprised at what people will do when you make them think they’re in charge. When you give them choices.”
While this book has all the good elements of a solid thriller, I was also intrigued as to how these characters experienced trauma. Throughout reading, I had theories, and though some revelations weren’t a complete surprise, these characters remained true to their core. There were times when I wanted to scream some sense into Charlotte, but the depth of her issues was glaring. Overall, I was glued to this book and couldn’t wait to read the final page.
The Rules of Burken is about manipulation and choices. This book will appeal to those who enjoy thrillers and the descent into moral wickedness.
*An ARC was provided in exchange for an honest review.*
*This was a (F)BR with Twinsie Hawkey!*
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April 10, 2019
Genre: Thriller
Type: Standalone
POV: First Person - Female
Rating:
Charlotte and Ian Stahl had been through a lot growing up. As kids, they played Burken, a modified game of hide-and-seek in the deep woods of Cadillac, Michigan. Now an adult, Charlotte agreed to play one more session for nostalgia. What she didn’t realize was the rules had changed, the goal turned deadly and it was certainly no longer an innocent child’s play.
This book intrigued me right from the beginning and got me clutching to the pages until the very end. I could feel Charlotte’s fear and desperation in anticipating Ian’s next move.
I love the premise of the book and how things unraveled. However, it was more of a revelation to the characters instead of to the readers. I also wanted more answers regarding Ian.
The two of them had an interesting dynamic. My feelings for both of them were opposite and it evolved as the story progressed. I also liked how the supporting characters echoed the main one and opened up a different perspective.
The Rules of Burken is a chilling tale of family secrets. It would appeal to readers who enjoy delving into the complexity of human psyche.
🌿 🔪 🌿 . . . (F)BR With Twisie CC . . . 🌿 🔪 🌿
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Type: Standalone
POV: First Person - Female
Rating:
Charlotte and Ian Stahl had been through a lot growing up. As kids, they played Burken, a modified game of hide-and-seek in the deep woods of Cadillac, Michigan. Now an adult, Charlotte agreed to play one more session for nostalgia. What she didn’t realize was the rules had changed, the goal turned deadly and it was certainly no longer an innocent child’s play.
This book intrigued me right from the beginning and got me clutching to the pages until the very end. I could feel Charlotte’s fear and desperation in anticipating Ian’s next move.
“And what about what I’ve been through, Charlotte? Everything’s always been about you. That’s what I’m trying to say! I’m dealing with the effects of everything that’s happened to us, too. Everything that’s happened to you has happened to me, too. You think you’re so alone in all your sorrows, well guess what? Hi! I know exactly what you’ve been through.”
I love the premise of the book and how things unraveled. However, it was more of a revelation to the characters instead of to the readers. I also wanted more answers regarding Ian.
I’ve been through too much to keep pretending things did and didn’t happen. I deserve closure, I deserve the truth.
The two of them had an interesting dynamic. My feelings for both of them were opposite and it evolved as the story progressed. I also liked how the supporting characters echoed the main one and opened up a different perspective.
The Rules of Burken is a chilling tale of family secrets. It would appeal to readers who enjoy delving into the complexity of human psyche.
🌿 🔪 🌿 . . . (F)BR With Twisie CC . . . 🌿 🔪 🌿
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April 15, 2019
Reviewed on: Ashes Books & Bobs
Debut author, Traci Finlay, took me on a crazy and nostalgic ride with her release, The Rules of Burken. Strangely enough, this book is set 10 miles from where I grew up for the first few years of my life. Cadillac, Michigan was a place my family visited nearly every weekend, my brother was born there, and some of my family members still reside there today. I was impressed by Traci's accurate descriptions of the city and the historical research she incorporated into the story. Reading this book brought back all of the feelings of living there. It was interesting to see the places the characters would venture to, all places I'm quite familiar with from my childhood, including the small town of Lake City (population under 1000). This is where my grandparents lived throughout my childhood, and like the main character Charlotte, I've floated around Lake Missaukee a time or two myself. This gave me a weird sense of deja vu, making the story feel all the more real to me.
Besides loving the setting, I thoroughly enjoyed how unpredictable this story was. I had no idea what to expect as things drew on - it felt as if any outcome was possible. The story had an eerie feel, which perfectly fit the setting, along with a constant state of suspense. I was eager to keep reading just to get the answers I was craving. I also felt completely crazy myself while reading from Charlotte's perspective. I was questioning her thoughts and actions as if they were my own.
Unfortunately, I did have a few hang-ups I hate to have to share. I've come to enjoy chatting with Traci about this release and the things we have in common, but I don't want my personal feelings to ever play a role in my credibility as a reviewer. I hope for my opinions to be constructive, rather than take away from the reading experience for others.
Overall, this story felt jumpy, as if it was lacking a clear direction. I can't quite put my finger on what could have improved this aspect of the plot for me, but it simply felt as if something was missing. Maybe I needed a few more words or descriptions or something else entirely. I wish I could articulate exactly what I needed here. I also thought the plot of the story seemed incredibly far-fetched, which made it harder to believe in the struggles of the characters. This disconnect with Charlotte was exacerbated by her indecision and constant wavering in the direction she wanted to go. While I can clearly see this is one of her defining character traits, I couldn't help but feel the same annoyance toward her as Jack did. I also struggled with how controlling the male characters were as well. Again, this is an important part of the story, but the defiant female in me wanted to see Charlotte raise some serious hell.
One more thing that I have to mention is probably a pointless inaccuracy to most readers but is something I cannot help but notice while reading any book. The main character mentions receiving a direct message from a boy on Instagram. This would have been perfectly fine if this happened in Charlotte's present time frame, but it happened when she would have been sixteen. Based on my math (Lord, help us all), she would have been sixteen in 2011, which was two years before Instagram introduced the DM feature. Admittedly, it's a minor thing but it matters to my nerdy side.
On the whole, this book had rather impressive qualities, not only for a debut but for any novel. I appreciated Traci's clear voice, the humor in the dialogue, and the fast-paced and suspenseful storyline. I will look forward to reading more by Traci in the future!
Debut author, Traci Finlay, took me on a crazy and nostalgic ride with her release, The Rules of Burken. Strangely enough, this book is set 10 miles from where I grew up for the first few years of my life. Cadillac, Michigan was a place my family visited nearly every weekend, my brother was born there, and some of my family members still reside there today. I was impressed by Traci's accurate descriptions of the city and the historical research she incorporated into the story. Reading this book brought back all of the feelings of living there. It was interesting to see the places the characters would venture to, all places I'm quite familiar with from my childhood, including the small town of Lake City (population under 1000). This is where my grandparents lived throughout my childhood, and like the main character Charlotte, I've floated around Lake Missaukee a time or two myself. This gave me a weird sense of deja vu, making the story feel all the more real to me.
Besides loving the setting, I thoroughly enjoyed how unpredictable this story was. I had no idea what to expect as things drew on - it felt as if any outcome was possible. The story had an eerie feel, which perfectly fit the setting, along with a constant state of suspense. I was eager to keep reading just to get the answers I was craving. I also felt completely crazy myself while reading from Charlotte's perspective. I was questioning her thoughts and actions as if they were my own.
Unfortunately, I did have a few hang-ups I hate to have to share. I've come to enjoy chatting with Traci about this release and the things we have in common, but I don't want my personal feelings to ever play a role in my credibility as a reviewer. I hope for my opinions to be constructive, rather than take away from the reading experience for others.
Overall, this story felt jumpy, as if it was lacking a clear direction. I can't quite put my finger on what could have improved this aspect of the plot for me, but it simply felt as if something was missing. Maybe I needed a few more words or descriptions or something else entirely. I wish I could articulate exactly what I needed here. I also thought the plot of the story seemed incredibly far-fetched, which made it harder to believe in the struggles of the characters. This disconnect with Charlotte was exacerbated by her indecision and constant wavering in the direction she wanted to go. While I can clearly see this is one of her defining character traits, I couldn't help but feel the same annoyance toward her as Jack did. I also struggled with how controlling the male characters were as well. Again, this is an important part of the story, but the defiant female in me wanted to see Charlotte raise some serious hell.
One more thing that I have to mention is probably a pointless inaccuracy to most readers but is something I cannot help but notice while reading any book. The main character mentions receiving a direct message from a boy on Instagram. This would have been perfectly fine if this happened in Charlotte's present time frame, but it happened when she would have been sixteen. Based on my math (Lord, help us all), she would have been sixteen in 2011, which was two years before Instagram introduced the DM feature. Admittedly, it's a minor thing but it matters to my nerdy side.
On the whole, this book had rather impressive qualities, not only for a debut but for any novel. I appreciated Traci's clear voice, the humor in the dialogue, and the fast-paced and suspenseful storyline. I will look forward to reading more by Traci in the future!
December 5, 2019
Soy una persona curiosa, por lo que cuando lei la sinopsis de The Rules Of Burken quede muy intrigada y si a esa razon le sumas que habia leido algunas reseñas positivas de esta novela, es normal que la empezara en cuanto pude.
The Rules Of Burken no fue lo que esperaba, por su premisa me hice la idea de que me encontraria un thriller espeluznante y lleno de tension, pero para nada fue asi. La trama hace aguas en muchas ocasiones, en parte porque todos los sucesos que narra estan cogidos con pinzas, es verdaderamente absurdo el como se va dando ciertas situaciones y si a eso le sumas el hecho de que los personajes son frivolos y que sus actitudes son incoherentes tienes todos los ingredientes para conseguir una historia superficial, poco agil y nada memorable.
Durante los primeros capitulos pense que la novela iria in crescendo, pero eso nunca paso, me falto mas suspenso, intriga y accion, realmente la sinopsis es mucho mejor que el libro en si, y no me hagan hablar de ese final, fue bastante malo e innecesario.
En resumen, The Rules Of Burken no es nada del otro mundo, ni siquiera merece estar etiquetado como thriller, puesto que ese genero le queda muy grande a esta insulsa novela.
2.25 Estrellas!
April 14, 2019
I loved the premise of it, even the plot, but the characters were a bit flat. What were their motivations, I wanted a bit more depth.
March 17, 2019
Buckle your seatbelts, dear readers, because Traci Finlay is going to take you on a chase that will have you running this way and that, sometimes looking over your shoulder and sometimes hiding from your worst fears.
Charlotte and her brother have played this game, Burken, since they were kids. The nature of the game is almost irrelevant; what intrigues you is why they play this sort of thing, particularly when they’re in their twenties. Why would a nearly thirty-year-old brother chase his sister, sometimes grappling her to the ground?
The moment that Ian changes the rules and assures Charlotte that he will kill her when he finds her, your heart stops. You read this book at times with your hands over your eyes, peeking through tiny holes, because Traci Finlay has you terrified as to what happens next.
As Charlotte attempts to make sense of her life and what she thinks she knows about it, you will be right there with her, as shocked and terrified as she is. This isn’t to say that you will always like Charlotte. Sometimes you will want to shout at her to wake up and to just stop being so blind to the dangers she almost seems to want to fling herself into. I enjoyed how Traci Finlay wrote Charlotte. She shows you Charlotte’s complexities, strengths, and weaknesses, making her someone you want to protect even when she is at her most self-destructive.
In fact, there are quite a few characters you may not like. Charlotte’s family is downright despicable, and the friends she makes struggle so hard to overcome the agonies that thwart them. Traci Finlay shows you people who have suffered some horrible, nightmarish pains. Some of them give up and allow those torments to dictate their lives; others fight valiantly, struggling to overcome that which attempts to destroy them.
The ending is one that book clubs will debate for hours, and that’s after they have dug into that whole “why do they play this game” question. This is a book you will need to talk about. You will want to share your favorite (and most frustrating) Charlotte moments, you will want to discuss the friendships she forms, and you will want to dissect that family of hers.
Traci Finlay delivers a chilling, breathless story of what happens when you convince yourself that what you hope to be true actually is.
Charlotte and her brother have played this game, Burken, since they were kids. The nature of the game is almost irrelevant; what intrigues you is why they play this sort of thing, particularly when they’re in their twenties. Why would a nearly thirty-year-old brother chase his sister, sometimes grappling her to the ground?
The moment that Ian changes the rules and assures Charlotte that he will kill her when he finds her, your heart stops. You read this book at times with your hands over your eyes, peeking through tiny holes, because Traci Finlay has you terrified as to what happens next.
As Charlotte attempts to make sense of her life and what she thinks she knows about it, you will be right there with her, as shocked and terrified as she is. This isn’t to say that you will always like Charlotte. Sometimes you will want to shout at her to wake up and to just stop being so blind to the dangers she almost seems to want to fling herself into. I enjoyed how Traci Finlay wrote Charlotte. She shows you Charlotte’s complexities, strengths, and weaknesses, making her someone you want to protect even when she is at her most self-destructive.
In fact, there are quite a few characters you may not like. Charlotte’s family is downright despicable, and the friends she makes struggle so hard to overcome the agonies that thwart them. Traci Finlay shows you people who have suffered some horrible, nightmarish pains. Some of them give up and allow those torments to dictate their lives; others fight valiantly, struggling to overcome that which attempts to destroy them.
The ending is one that book clubs will debate for hours, and that’s after they have dug into that whole “why do they play this game” question. This is a book you will need to talk about. You will want to share your favorite (and most frustrating) Charlotte moments, you will want to discuss the friendships she forms, and you will want to dissect that family of hers.
Traci Finlay delivers a chilling, breathless story of what happens when you convince yourself that what you hope to be true actually is.
August 26, 2019
4 STARS
This was a great and intrigued read!It was a crazy ride, I was hooked and anxious to see what will happen!The romance isn't the central on the story and I did't mind at all!The premise was good and I was mesmerized!
It was fast paced, and I liked the writing!I thought had figured all but I was so wrong!It surprised me and this is good!
I'm excited to see what else this author has for us!
This was a great and intrigued read!It was a crazy ride, I was hooked and anxious to see what will happen!The romance isn't the central on the story and I did't mind at all!The premise was good and I was mesmerized!
It was fast paced, and I liked the writing!I thought had figured all but I was so wrong!It surprised me and this is good!
I'm excited to see what else this author has for us!
March 6, 2019
5 Crazy Ass Must Read Stars!!!!!
What the heck did I just read?!?! That was some freaky, crazy, twisted story! I was literally on the edge of my seat while reading right from the start.
I started reading this Monday evening. I had to stop because books like this tend to freak me out When I picked this back up Tuesday morning, I was on the edge of my seat.
Just when I thought I had things figured out or I thought the story was going a certain way, Ms Finlay would throw me for a loop. She had my jaw hanging open with just the little twists in the plot so imagine how I was with the big ones. Yup, best neck ache ever! I can just feel my shoulder tensing up just thinking back on it all right now.
I'm not usually fond of flashbacks in a story where every other chapter is a flashback. However, it worked for this story and felt it pertinent to the flow of the story.
There is a little romance thread to this story but it is not overwhelming and not at all the central focus. At first, I kind of thought it was irrelevant to the storyline but in the end it helps shape the heroine.
For all you Thriller lovers out there, this is one you have to read. It is so a "Crazy Ass Must Read"!
What the heck did I just read?!?! That was some freaky, crazy, twisted story! I was literally on the edge of my seat while reading right from the start.
I started reading this Monday evening. I had to stop because books like this tend to freak me out When I picked this back up Tuesday morning, I was on the edge of my seat.
Just when I thought I had things figured out or I thought the story was going a certain way, Ms Finlay would throw me for a loop. She had my jaw hanging open with just the little twists in the plot so imagine how I was with the big ones. Yup, best neck ache ever! I can just feel my shoulder tensing up just thinking back on it all right now.
I'm not usually fond of flashbacks in a story where every other chapter is a flashback. However, it worked for this story and felt it pertinent to the flow of the story.
There is a little romance thread to this story but it is not overwhelming and not at all the central focus. At first, I kind of thought it was irrelevant to the storyline but in the end it helps shape the heroine.
For all you Thriller lovers out there, this is one you have to read. It is so a "Crazy Ass Must Read"!
March 25, 2019
Hide and seek on steroids, little red riding hood with an ax and a sick, sick wolf. Review to follow.
August 23, 2019
I am one member of a wife/husband review team. Here is the review from our book blog shesaidhesaidbookreviews.com.
He said:
If you’re new to following us, then welcome! Those of you who have been following us for some time have probably seen a trend in the types of books we review. They tend to be romance, or as Erica has shared with me, “New Adult Contemporary Romance,” which is not to be confused with the Fabio-on-the-cover romances…I guess. I don’t know. Man-brain.
Anyway, it’s been a little while since we did something outside that genre, so you can imagine my excitement when Erica mentioned reviewing The Rules of Burken, a thriller by Traci Finlay.
The Rules of Burken (the title will make sense when you read it) is about a brother, Ian, and sister, Charlotte, who basically grow up playing hide-and-seek on crack, and what happens when one of them takes it too far. In our previous reviews, I’ve found myself growing accustomed to reading dual perspective stories. Maybe authors feel readers expect that now. Maybe it just might be the books we’ve read, but I feel like most of the romance books have had both male and female perspectives, which works great for those kinds of books. But this book is different.
The Rules of Burken is told from a single point of view; in this case, it is Charlotte’s perspective. The story unfolds as a dual timeline in a way you would expect with a thriller—cliffhangers at nearly every current-time chapter, before flashing back to give more of their family history. I can see how some people would say they wish they had Ian’s perspective in the book. However, for me, it was more exciting not to know where Ian was, what Ian was thinking, and when he would show up. It left it up to me to wonder and helped build the tension.
I like thrillers, although I feel like there are different kinds. There are scary or horror Stephen-King-type thrillers, suspenseful what’s-happening-next thrillers, and then the whodunit serial thrillers. Whenever I start reading one of these, I know in advance that some of it will feel like “that wouldn’t really happen” or “I wouldn’t do that,” but as the only thing I can remember from high school English Shakespeare lessons, we must “suspend thy disbelief” (or some crap like that) to focus on enjoying the story. We know the woman shouldn’t run upstairs or down into the basement; she should jump out the fucking window and run! We know that noise downstairs is never something you’re supposed to go check; you should get the hell out of there! And if a dog named Cujo shows up or you see a clown holding a red balloon, no! You should NOT just think it’s quirky and no big deal. But when reading these types of books, I don’t read for the accuracy, I read for the story. I don’t find myself focusing on minute details and facts, like I have in other genres. My litmus test for thrillers is whether I feel like I’ve been taken on a fun roller coaster of emotions and stress. With The Rules of Burken, not only did I feel like I was taken on a great roller coaster, but it felt like Traci had given me the whole theme park to myself.
Also, Traci managed to weave into the story one of the best 90s songs ever written, the Crash Test Dummies’ “Mmm Mmm Mmm Mmm,” which I have had in my head ever since reading the book. I find myself making up new lines and singing them in my head. I literally can’t stop. “Once there was this girl who, wrote a book about some fucking twisted fucked-up shit.” See? Easy! And if the song is now in your head, you’re welcome. If you don’t know the song, go look it up. Do it. Do it now.
So back to the review… I would probably categorize The Rules of Burken as a suspenseful what’s-happening-next thriller rather than a horror or serial thriller. It’s my understanding that Traci has had this story in one form or another for quite a few years before being encouraged to publish it now. I am very glad she did. I had so much fun reading it, and I look forward to seeing what she does next. She’s definitely an author to watch.
She said:
Full disclosure: I co-edited this book. And this isn’t the first time I’ve reviewed something I’ve worked on. But in those other cases I was like proofreader #3.5, so I figured it was no big deal. Should it be? Should I not be allowed to share my thoughts because I’ve been behind the scenes? That’s for you to decide. If I didn’t believe in this book, if I didn’t feel like I had something to add to the discourse, I wouldn’t write about it.
The Rules of Burken is Traci’s first published novel. Let me say that again for the people in the back: THIS IS TRACI’S DEBUT! It should’ve lacked fluidity, it should’ve had plot holes, it should’ve had major typos. It had none of these things. Instead, I read it and thought, “Should she be paying me to edit this, or should I just send her my $3.99 RIGHT ABOUT NOW?” In truth, editorially, there wasn’t much to change. It was clean. It was precise. It was clearly suspenseful and well-crafted. Her choices related to perspective and characterization were intentional and well-supported. Really, she didn’t need me or Willow, but Traci, if you’re reading this, just know I’m forever your girl. (Another 90s song for the win!)
Maybe what makes Traci different from other rookie authors is that she’s spent the last decade focusing on her craft. Maybe what makes her unique is that she writes and edits (and, damn, can this girl edit!). In any event, she has spent the last ten years growing as a writer and polishing her work. And it shows.
Like Matt said, this is not the most realistic of tales. You won’t find yourself saying, “This is EXACTLY what happened to me!” But what I love about books is that they provide an escape, and Traci’s is no exception. The entire time I was reading, I was spellbound. Literally on the edge of my seat, or bed, if I’m being honest. Who reads in a seat?? Bed-reading is where it’s at! Anyway, laundry piled up, the dishes were left in the sink, and there were many cereal-for-dinner nights. Even in my rereading of it, I didn’t want to stop. That says something, guys! I knew what was coming, and I still didn’t want to stop.
No, the story itself wasn’t real, but the places described were. I’ve never been to Michigan, but because I’ve read The Rules of Burken, I feel like I have. I’ve swum while fully clothed in Lake Missaukee with Charlotte. I’ve had Bay City pizza with Nikka on a papasan chair. The places described and scenarios put forth were at times very realistic, turning a tale that could’ve been far-fetched into something that pushes you into “what if” territory. What if I were Charlotte? Who would I go to for help? What would I do without a phone or a car? How sane or logical would my actions be if I feared for my life? It’s this “what if” terrain that illustrated Traci’s authorial talent. She found the balance between the extreme and the relatable, and she handpicked when to reveal each side. The result was a kind of literary harmony that I always wanted more of, especially once the story ended.
He said:
THAT’S why we had cereal for dinner?! Dang.
Erica is absolutely right—Traci’s writing definitely evokes emotions, makes you feel like you are there, and also triggered some childhood memories for me. No, we didn’t play like Charlotte and Ian, but I have an older sister who used to agree to play hide-and-seek, always sending me to hide and never coming to look. I get it. I was the annoying little brother. She would leave me hiding while she went off to do whatever it was tweens did back then—in their jellies and heading to Claire’s, I’m sure.
While I never hope to have to play a game of Burken, I do hope you take a chance and read this book. Doing this blog with Erica has really made me think about how much time and effort authors put into creating their books before releasing them. Thinking about how Traci had this book on her computer for the better part of decade, toying with it here and there, makes me think back to all the books I’ve read and reviewed in the past, whether here or through Amazon/Goodreads. I am grateful these independent authors put their lives into these books just to give us something we can, as Erica said, escape into. While money is always tight, I am happy to support the independent author. Less than $5 for a decade of work? One-click. And with The Rules of Burken, that is a steal. I’ve paid much more for trade-published thrillers that weren’t as good as this one.
Curious? Go find out for yourself, Little Spider.
He said:
If you’re new to following us, then welcome! Those of you who have been following us for some time have probably seen a trend in the types of books we review. They tend to be romance, or as Erica has shared with me, “New Adult Contemporary Romance,” which is not to be confused with the Fabio-on-the-cover romances…I guess. I don’t know. Man-brain.
Anyway, it’s been a little while since we did something outside that genre, so you can imagine my excitement when Erica mentioned reviewing The Rules of Burken, a thriller by Traci Finlay.
The Rules of Burken (the title will make sense when you read it) is about a brother, Ian, and sister, Charlotte, who basically grow up playing hide-and-seek on crack, and what happens when one of them takes it too far. In our previous reviews, I’ve found myself growing accustomed to reading dual perspective stories. Maybe authors feel readers expect that now. Maybe it just might be the books we’ve read, but I feel like most of the romance books have had both male and female perspectives, which works great for those kinds of books. But this book is different.
The Rules of Burken is told from a single point of view; in this case, it is Charlotte’s perspective. The story unfolds as a dual timeline in a way you would expect with a thriller—cliffhangers at nearly every current-time chapter, before flashing back to give more of their family history. I can see how some people would say they wish they had Ian’s perspective in the book. However, for me, it was more exciting not to know where Ian was, what Ian was thinking, and when he would show up. It left it up to me to wonder and helped build the tension.
I like thrillers, although I feel like there are different kinds. There are scary or horror Stephen-King-type thrillers, suspenseful what’s-happening-next thrillers, and then the whodunit serial thrillers. Whenever I start reading one of these, I know in advance that some of it will feel like “that wouldn’t really happen” or “I wouldn’t do that,” but as the only thing I can remember from high school English Shakespeare lessons, we must “suspend thy disbelief” (or some crap like that) to focus on enjoying the story. We know the woman shouldn’t run upstairs or down into the basement; she should jump out the fucking window and run! We know that noise downstairs is never something you’re supposed to go check; you should get the hell out of there! And if a dog named Cujo shows up or you see a clown holding a red balloon, no! You should NOT just think it’s quirky and no big deal. But when reading these types of books, I don’t read for the accuracy, I read for the story. I don’t find myself focusing on minute details and facts, like I have in other genres. My litmus test for thrillers is whether I feel like I’ve been taken on a fun roller coaster of emotions and stress. With The Rules of Burken, not only did I feel like I was taken on a great roller coaster, but it felt like Traci had given me the whole theme park to myself.
Also, Traci managed to weave into the story one of the best 90s songs ever written, the Crash Test Dummies’ “Mmm Mmm Mmm Mmm,” which I have had in my head ever since reading the book. I find myself making up new lines and singing them in my head. I literally can’t stop. “Once there was this girl who, wrote a book about some fucking twisted fucked-up shit.” See? Easy! And if the song is now in your head, you’re welcome. If you don’t know the song, go look it up. Do it. Do it now.
So back to the review… I would probably categorize The Rules of Burken as a suspenseful what’s-happening-next thriller rather than a horror or serial thriller. It’s my understanding that Traci has had this story in one form or another for quite a few years before being encouraged to publish it now. I am very glad she did. I had so much fun reading it, and I look forward to seeing what she does next. She’s definitely an author to watch.
She said:
Full disclosure: I co-edited this book. And this isn’t the first time I’ve reviewed something I’ve worked on. But in those other cases I was like proofreader #3.5, so I figured it was no big deal. Should it be? Should I not be allowed to share my thoughts because I’ve been behind the scenes? That’s for you to decide. If I didn’t believe in this book, if I didn’t feel like I had something to add to the discourse, I wouldn’t write about it.
The Rules of Burken is Traci’s first published novel. Let me say that again for the people in the back: THIS IS TRACI’S DEBUT! It should’ve lacked fluidity, it should’ve had plot holes, it should’ve had major typos. It had none of these things. Instead, I read it and thought, “Should she be paying me to edit this, or should I just send her my $3.99 RIGHT ABOUT NOW?” In truth, editorially, there wasn’t much to change. It was clean. It was precise. It was clearly suspenseful and well-crafted. Her choices related to perspective and characterization were intentional and well-supported. Really, she didn’t need me or Willow, but Traci, if you’re reading this, just know I’m forever your girl. (Another 90s song for the win!)
Maybe what makes Traci different from other rookie authors is that she’s spent the last decade focusing on her craft. Maybe what makes her unique is that she writes and edits (and, damn, can this girl edit!). In any event, she has spent the last ten years growing as a writer and polishing her work. And it shows.
Like Matt said, this is not the most realistic of tales. You won’t find yourself saying, “This is EXACTLY what happened to me!” But what I love about books is that they provide an escape, and Traci’s is no exception. The entire time I was reading, I was spellbound. Literally on the edge of my seat, or bed, if I’m being honest. Who reads in a seat?? Bed-reading is where it’s at! Anyway, laundry piled up, the dishes were left in the sink, and there were many cereal-for-dinner nights. Even in my rereading of it, I didn’t want to stop. That says something, guys! I knew what was coming, and I still didn’t want to stop.
No, the story itself wasn’t real, but the places described were. I’ve never been to Michigan, but because I’ve read The Rules of Burken, I feel like I have. I’ve swum while fully clothed in Lake Missaukee with Charlotte. I’ve had Bay City pizza with Nikka on a papasan chair. The places described and scenarios put forth were at times very realistic, turning a tale that could’ve been far-fetched into something that pushes you into “what if” territory. What if I were Charlotte? Who would I go to for help? What would I do without a phone or a car? How sane or logical would my actions be if I feared for my life? It’s this “what if” terrain that illustrated Traci’s authorial talent. She found the balance between the extreme and the relatable, and she handpicked when to reveal each side. The result was a kind of literary harmony that I always wanted more of, especially once the story ended.
He said:
THAT’S why we had cereal for dinner?! Dang.
Erica is absolutely right—Traci’s writing definitely evokes emotions, makes you feel like you are there, and also triggered some childhood memories for me. No, we didn’t play like Charlotte and Ian, but I have an older sister who used to agree to play hide-and-seek, always sending me to hide and never coming to look. I get it. I was the annoying little brother. She would leave me hiding while she went off to do whatever it was tweens did back then—in their jellies and heading to Claire’s, I’m sure.
While I never hope to have to play a game of Burken, I do hope you take a chance and read this book. Doing this blog with Erica has really made me think about how much time and effort authors put into creating their books before releasing them. Thinking about how Traci had this book on her computer for the better part of decade, toying with it here and there, makes me think back to all the books I’ve read and reviewed in the past, whether here or through Amazon/Goodreads. I am grateful these independent authors put their lives into these books just to give us something we can, as Erica said, escape into. While money is always tight, I am happy to support the independent author. Less than $5 for a decade of work? One-click. And with The Rules of Burken, that is a steal. I’ve paid much more for trade-published thrillers that weren’t as good as this one.
Curious? Go find out for yourself, Little Spider.
April 4, 2019
"I see you, Little Spider."
Other than the fact that this story was a little too far-fetched for me, I enjoyed the book as a whole. Not because of the plot, but because I really loved the pacing of the story and I think that is what sealed the deal for me. It didn't have any lulls and I didn't get bored and skim at any parts. It kept my mind busy and it kept the pages turning for me.
While reading The Rules of Burken, I liked having the constant anxiety of what was going to happen next. I felt like I was right beside Charlotte watching over my shoulder wondering what was going to pop out (or who). I think that comes back to Traci being a great story-teller. She made me feel like I was INSIDE the story with the characters.
But...Ian was a tad creepy. Not in a good way and almost even an unrealistic way. He was a little hard for me to understand although I tried. I feel like his part of the story was just so random and should have been explored a little bit more. What if we had POVs through Ian? Thought processes? I love being inside the minds of sociopaths. Love it. I wonder what Ian's mind would have been like?
"When are you going to realize that whenever you're left with no place to go, I'm always right behind you."
The only thing I didn't love was the plot. The execution fell kind of flat for me. I felt like it was all kind of thrown together into this circumstance (game) that we are just supposed to understand why it's happening.
For being a debut novel, I think Traci did a fantastic job. I can't imagine wanting to write my first book and deciding "hey, it is going to be a thriller!" The pieces to put together, the plot, the characters and keeping it all together: I get a headache just thinking about it. So for this being a debut novel, I think Traci went above and beyond my expectations. I didn't expect for her to write such a compelling story for her first time but she really did a great a job.
Other than the fact that this story was a little too far-fetched for me, I enjoyed the book as a whole. Not because of the plot, but because I really loved the pacing of the story and I think that is what sealed the deal for me. It didn't have any lulls and I didn't get bored and skim at any parts. It kept my mind busy and it kept the pages turning for me.
While reading The Rules of Burken, I liked having the constant anxiety of what was going to happen next. I felt like I was right beside Charlotte watching over my shoulder wondering what was going to pop out (or who). I think that comes back to Traci being a great story-teller. She made me feel like I was INSIDE the story with the characters.
But...Ian was a tad creepy. Not in a good way and almost even an unrealistic way. He was a little hard for me to understand although I tried. I feel like his part of the story was just so random and should have been explored a little bit more. What if we had POVs through Ian? Thought processes? I love being inside the minds of sociopaths. Love it. I wonder what Ian's mind would have been like?
"When are you going to realize that whenever you're left with no place to go, I'm always right behind you."
The only thing I didn't love was the plot. The execution fell kind of flat for me. I felt like it was all kind of thrown together into this circumstance (game) that we are just supposed to understand why it's happening.
For being a debut novel, I think Traci did a fantastic job. I can't imagine wanting to write my first book and deciding "hey, it is going to be a thriller!" The pieces to put together, the plot, the characters and keeping it all together: I get a headache just thinking about it. So for this being a debut novel, I think Traci went above and beyond my expectations. I didn't expect for her to write such a compelling story for her first time but she really did a great a job.
April 18, 2019
I received an ARC of this from Netgalley in exchange for a fair and honest review. Thank you, Netgalley.
Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose. That applies to reading books and to the main character of this book.
Charlotte always seems to lose, both at Burken and in life.
I wanted to get into this book. I did. However, at 70% I'm throwing in the towel.
Charlotte WANTS to be a Mary Sue victim. At 23, she is still being controlled by a psychopathic older brother. She's not allowed to date and apparently the only female friends she can have are ones her brother will sleep with.
The plot holes are numerous - don't drive your car through them if you value its undercarriage.
Firstly - Ian, the brother, one day randomly decides he's going to kill Charlotte. With an axe.
She runs. Not to the police or anywhere with anyone capable of helping her but to another town to befriend a prostitute and HER brother, the love interest.
She leaves behind her cell phone, all her stuff, her home filled with physical evidence of the brother's axe attack and numerous ex-girlfriends of the brother who are willing to talk about his violent history with them. She also leaves behind a new, decent job as the high school gym teacher and coach.
The main reason I'm finally DNF'ing this is because, at 70%, both Charlotte and the prostitute keep referring to the prostitute's brother as "mean." He seems to be the only one with any sense and he's trying to save their Mary Sue asses from all this stupid nonsense.
"Jack's so mean." "Why is Jack being so mean to me?"
If Jack is being so mean, why is this twenty-three-year-old virgin about to have sex with him?
I can't read that. I can't take this anymore.
HOW OLD ARE THESE PEOPLE MENTALLY? 9????
Actual Rating: 1.5 stars
Format: Kindle eARC
Source: Netgalley
Current ebook price: $3.99 or free with Kindle Unlimited
Opinion of Price: If you are very, very new to YA or NA fiction and have no experience of real life and abusive situations, you *might* find this weirdly fun and romantic, I guess. Gack! The interior chapter headers and spiders are a really nice touch. So, not a bad deal, if it turns out you love it.
My Cost: $0.00
Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose. That applies to reading books and to the main character of this book.
Charlotte always seems to lose, both at Burken and in life.
I wanted to get into this book. I did. However, at 70% I'm throwing in the towel.
Charlotte WANTS to be a Mary Sue victim. At 23, she is still being controlled by a psychopathic older brother. She's not allowed to date and apparently the only female friends she can have are ones her brother will sleep with.
The plot holes are numerous - don't drive your car through them if you value its undercarriage.
Firstly - Ian, the brother, one day randomly decides he's going to kill Charlotte. With an axe.
She runs. Not to the police or anywhere with anyone capable of helping her but to another town to befriend a prostitute and HER brother, the love interest.
She leaves behind her cell phone, all her stuff, her home filled with physical evidence of the brother's axe attack and numerous ex-girlfriends of the brother who are willing to talk about his violent history with them. She also leaves behind a new, decent job as the high school gym teacher and coach.
The main reason I'm finally DNF'ing this is because, at 70%, both Charlotte and the prostitute keep referring to the prostitute's brother as "mean." He seems to be the only one with any sense and he's trying to save their Mary Sue asses from all this stupid nonsense.
"Jack's so mean." "Why is Jack being so mean to me?"
If Jack is being so mean, why is this twenty-three-year-old virgin about to have sex with him?
I can't read that. I can't take this anymore.
HOW OLD ARE THESE PEOPLE MENTALLY? 9????
Actual Rating: 1.5 stars
Format: Kindle eARC
Source: Netgalley
Current ebook price: $3.99 or free with Kindle Unlimited
Opinion of Price: If you are very, very new to YA or NA fiction and have no experience of real life and abusive situations, you *might* find this weirdly fun and romantic, I guess. Gack! The interior chapter headers and spiders are a really nice touch. So, not a bad deal, if it turns out you love it.
My Cost: $0.00
April 7, 2019
This book was a tough cookie for me to review. It starts out strange and creepy, just how I like. Then quickly things become... different.
The story goes back and forth between then, when Charlotte was a child, and now as she is on the run from her brother.
Surprisingly, the before parts took some of the creep factor out of it and I started looking forward to the now parts. I just wanted answers.
It’s one of those you won’t be able to put down because you really want to know the truth and answers.
It’s unsettling, for sure, and something is... off.
I look forward to reading more from Traci as she shapes her writing craft!
The story goes back and forth between then, when Charlotte was a child, and now as she is on the run from her brother.
Surprisingly, the before parts took some of the creep factor out of it and I started looking forward to the now parts. I just wanted answers.
It’s one of those you won’t be able to put down because you really want to know the truth and answers.
It’s unsettling, for sure, and something is... off.
I look forward to reading more from Traci as she shapes her writing craft!
August 30, 2019
3.5
Este libro empezo muy bien. Una trama interesante que se desarrola como un rompecabeza intentando conocer y entender el comportamiento y mente psicopata de Ian.
En la mitad sentí que se pauso todo el tema de Ian y esos capítulos fueron flojos. Pero aparte de eso fue una buena lectura.
Este libro empezo muy bien. Una trama interesante que se desarrola como un rompecabeza intentando conocer y entender el comportamiento y mente psicopata de Ian.
En la mitad sentí que se pauso todo el tema de Ian y esos capítulos fueron flojos. Pero aparte de eso fue una buena lectura.
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April 24, 2019After several days of hovering around the same %, I think it's time to give up.
The synopsis was SO FUCKING promising and I was really excited to give it a shot. But it's falling short in so many ways. The MC feels too juvenile and she simply isn't making any sense to me.
*sad panda*
The synopsis was SO FUCKING promising and I was really excited to give it a shot. But it's falling short in so many ways. The MC feels too juvenile and she simply isn't making any sense to me.
*sad panda*
April 24, 2019
The Rules of Burken was such an intense ride! It starts right off in a crazy situation, and each chapter from the past added to the tension for what was going on in the present. You saw a progression of what was happening to Charlotte and what she went through. I feel as though Charlotte’s maturity for a lot of it was much younger than her age, but when you put into consideration that her growth was being stunted and manipulated from an early age, that makes sense. The way the game played into the plot and what was really going on was brilliant, and I have to say I was basically biting off all my nails throughout this entire read. And that ending! Part of me wishes for a more resolute ending and I want to know what happened AFTER what happened, but then I understand that it was a great idea to leave that up to the readers mind.
Okay, so I’d absolutely recommend this if you are after something that’s going to mess with your mind. I love how Finlay set the mood for this entire book, and I think it might take some time to shake it off now.
Okay, so I’d absolutely recommend this if you are after something that’s going to mess with your mind. I love how Finlay set the mood for this entire book, and I think it might take some time to shake it off now.
March 22, 2019
This book was, woah. There were so many twists, turns and WTF moments. The story resonated with me because of the subject matter. These people are real and live among us, charming their way into society. This book was creepy cause it can happen, has happened, and continues to happen. I really thought I knew where it was going about 22%, but that all went out the door. It was a book that is going to stay with me for a long time.
March 9, 2020
This book was, woah. There were so many twists, turns and WTF moments. The story resonated with me because of the subject matter. These people are real and live among us, charming their way into society. This book was creepy cause it can happen, has happened, and continues to happen. I really thought I knew where it was going about 22%, but that all went out the door. It was a book that is going to stay with me for a long time.
April 13, 2019
Good bones, a bit flat
I loved the premise of this story! The first chapter will have you really excited to read something new. Unfortunately for me, a lot of the middle fell flat.
The story that Charlotte lives after the first few chapters feels disjointed. There is so much going on and at times I forgot the true beginning and who was involved. Also, Charlotte herself was a bit of a mystery to me. I never fully feel connected to her or understand her thoughts and motives. It could be intentional because she is so controlled and sheltered. However, it just made it harder for me to get in her head.
I can appreciate the underlying thriller aspect and think that there is a lot to build on. But for me, the story as a whole was just a bit underwhelming.
I loved the premise of this story! The first chapter will have you really excited to read something new. Unfortunately for me, a lot of the middle fell flat.
The story that Charlotte lives after the first few chapters feels disjointed. There is so much going on and at times I forgot the true beginning and who was involved. Also, Charlotte herself was a bit of a mystery to me. I never fully feel connected to her or understand her thoughts and motives. It could be intentional because she is so controlled and sheltered. However, it just made it harder for me to get in her head.
I can appreciate the underlying thriller aspect and think that there is a lot to build on. But for me, the story as a whole was just a bit underwhelming.
April 11, 2019
This is a solid debut for Traci Finlay. I was on the edge of me seat wanting to get my hands on it as soon as she released the cover. The cover is perfect for this story and really ties in perfectly to everything.
This book started out really strong for me and for the most part stayed strong throughout. There were a few times the story dragged for me and I almost got comfortable thinking it was all over even when I knew I still had half a book to read. I think those parts took a bit away from the story as a whole but those times were fleeting and the story would pick up pace again.
The other side of the book slowing down a bit was there was so much going on. Pasts being unraveled, Charlotte trying to figure out what is happening in the present and just all around trying to see Ian for what he truly is. The author did a great job of showing the readers Ian but also letting us see him through Charlotte's eyes and why she defended him for so long. Finlay balanced out those two worlds in a way that I feel like we get a good feeling on what a true sociopath is and how they can control people around them. It was fascinating to watch unfold and I almost wish we could have gotten a few chapters in Ian's head. I think that would have really rounded out this story for me.
I will definitely be watching out for the next book by this author as I think she has a great career ahead of her in writing. You can tell she put the work in for her first novel and it's going to be a beautiful thing watching as she hones her craft. The plot, writing, everything really, for her debut is everything you wish to read when picking up a new author.
This book started out really strong for me and for the most part stayed strong throughout. There were a few times the story dragged for me and I almost got comfortable thinking it was all over even when I knew I still had half a book to read. I think those parts took a bit away from the story as a whole but those times were fleeting and the story would pick up pace again.
The other side of the book slowing down a bit was there was so much going on. Pasts being unraveled, Charlotte trying to figure out what is happening in the present and just all around trying to see Ian for what he truly is. The author did a great job of showing the readers Ian but also letting us see him through Charlotte's eyes and why she defended him for so long. Finlay balanced out those two worlds in a way that I feel like we get a good feeling on what a true sociopath is and how they can control people around them. It was fascinating to watch unfold and I almost wish we could have gotten a few chapters in Ian's head. I think that would have really rounded out this story for me.
I will definitely be watching out for the next book by this author as I think she has a great career ahead of her in writing. You can tell she put the work in for her first novel and it's going to be a beautiful thing watching as she hones her craft. The plot, writing, everything really, for her debut is everything you wish to read when picking up a new author.
April 15, 2019
Wow. What a story. I’m really not sure how to write a review on this story.
As children Charlotte and her brother made up a game called Burken. Grown up now Ian wants to play the game again. Charlotte now finds herself running from him in. A dangerous game of Burken.
This is an intriguing twisted fast paced read that I highly recommend.
I rarely re read as there is so much books out there but I’ll certainly be re reading this gem. I’m looking forward to reading more from this author in the future,
As children Charlotte and her brother made up a game called Burken. Grown up now Ian wants to play the game again. Charlotte now finds herself running from him in. A dangerous game of Burken.
This is an intriguing twisted fast paced read that I highly recommend.
I rarely re read as there is so much books out there but I’ll certainly be re reading this gem. I’m looking forward to reading more from this author in the future,
April 15, 2019
I know I've hit the jackpot when a book captivates me from the very first page. A twisted game of, Hide and Seek, if ever there was one.
Traci Finlay managed to pull me into the story so well it was almost as though I was watching it play out on the big screen.
Not only did I not want to put it down, but I also found myself grateful for train delays, if it meant I had more time to read this book.
To anyone about to read this, make sure you have some free time, believe me when I say you will want to devour it in one sitting.
I can't wait to see what Traci has in store for us next, sign me up.
Traci Finlay managed to pull me into the story so well it was almost as though I was watching it play out on the big screen.
Not only did I not want to put it down, but I also found myself grateful for train delays, if it meant I had more time to read this book.
To anyone about to read this, make sure you have some free time, believe me when I say you will want to devour it in one sitting.
I can't wait to see what Traci has in store for us next, sign me up.
April 26, 2019
This was a fast paced and intriguing read! It kept me guessing and I wasn’t sure WHAT was going on for most of it!
I loved the chemistry between the characters and the way I could relate to all of them...minus Ian ;)
I loved the chemistry between the characters and the way I could relate to all of them...minus Ian ;)
April 10, 2019
4.5 ⭐️’s. I really enjoyed this book. All of the twists and turns, I had no idea what was going to happen next. Traci wrote with lots of feeling and as you read it, you feel it too. I recommend reading this book!! Arc provided
April 12, 2019
Holy hell. I did not want to put this book down. I needed to know what was going to happen, to understand why. This story kept me completely enthralled from beginning to end. And that ending.... 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 Traci killed it.
March 18, 2019
I’ve restarted this review about four times. My struggle is real because there is no way to adequately gush about this twisted and addictive story until the author creates some kind of reader-rehab group where we can all get together and dissect the beautiful madness we have just read. A murderous father, a runaway mother, and a charismatic brother—the best a girl could ask for—who might be better at playing games than Charlotte ever thought.
This book works. It works because Ian is…brilliant. I clung to his every word. It works because Charlotte is all of us at different points in our lives. Traci Finlay has managed to produce one of the most complex yet relatable characters I have read in some time. Her writing style carries a natural tone and invites the readers to be so comfortable that they miss the sleight of hand at play. Masterfully weaving a web of chest-tightening action, the author clearly meant for readers to feed their kids delivery on pub night because there is no way of putting this one down until reaching the very last line.
You’ll want the answers even more than Charlotte.
And then you won’t be able to quit thinking about what those answers mean…
This book works. It works because Ian is…brilliant. I clung to his every word. It works because Charlotte is all of us at different points in our lives. Traci Finlay has managed to produce one of the most complex yet relatable characters I have read in some time. Her writing style carries a natural tone and invites the readers to be so comfortable that they miss the sleight of hand at play. Masterfully weaving a web of chest-tightening action, the author clearly meant for readers to feed their kids delivery on pub night because there is no way of putting this one down until reaching the very last line.
You’ll want the answers even more than Charlotte.
And then you won’t be able to quit thinking about what those answers mean…
April 23, 2019
I received a digital copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
I alternated between loving this story and absolutely despising it. Plot holes, suspension of disbelief so high it’ll give you vertigo, and the most infuriatingly insipid and ridiculous main character I’ve encountered in years.
Ian and Nikka were the only characters who made any sense. And Ian tried to kill his sister with an axe.
This storyline had some serious potential, and there were parts of it I enjoyed. Like Ian trying to kill his sister with an axe. For no particular reason.
Charlotte had some nice snarky one-liners in this. Almost as if she knew she was a ridiculous character in an unbelievable story.
Jack was...well, Jack was Ian. Except without an axe, and with a sister who actually wasn’t a total moron.
Like Jack, I wanted to punch everyone in this book for being stupid. Except Ian. And maybe Nikka sometimes.
I thoroughly enjoyed the ride that was reading this book. It was SO bad, that it was nearly good. Would recommend for people who like disturbing, who like plots that are actually aware of their own ridiculousness, and people who don’t mind wanting to set characters on fire just to knock some sense into them...and yet loving the experience.
Actual rating 1.5, but rounded up to 2 for the giddy enjoyment of its WTFness.
I alternated between loving this story and absolutely despising it. Plot holes, suspension of disbelief so high it’ll give you vertigo, and the most infuriatingly insipid and ridiculous main character I’ve encountered in years.
Ian and Nikka were the only characters who made any sense. And Ian tried to kill his sister with an axe.
This storyline had some serious potential, and there were parts of it I enjoyed. Like Ian trying to kill his sister with an axe. For no particular reason.
Charlotte had some nice snarky one-liners in this. Almost as if she knew she was a ridiculous character in an unbelievable story.
Jack was...well, Jack was Ian. Except without an axe, and with a sister who actually wasn’t a total moron.
Like Jack, I wanted to punch everyone in this book for being stupid. Except Ian. And maybe Nikka sometimes.
I thoroughly enjoyed the ride that was reading this book. It was SO bad, that it was nearly good. Would recommend for people who like disturbing, who like plots that are actually aware of their own ridiculousness, and people who don’t mind wanting to set characters on fire just to knock some sense into them...and yet loving the experience.
Actual rating 1.5, but rounded up to 2 for the giddy enjoyment of its WTFness.
June 11, 2019
This was THE WORST BOOK I have ever read. I wanted to like it soooo badly, but it just kept getting worse. Her brother wants to kill her... and she tells multiple people along the way and they react as though she said “it’s raining outside” like kinda upset but they’ll get over it. Not once did someone say “wtf call the police,” just “oh wow that’s crazy, let’s go get dinner.” DO NOT READ.
April 10, 2019
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4.5 Stars ~ Reviewed by Anna on behalf of KindleFriendsForever
This debut novel had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning of the story and by the time I finished reading it I felt like I just got off from a rollercoaster ride. This is an impressive first attempt by the author and I am hooked.
Charlotte and Ian are siblings and Ian has always looked after her. At the age of twenty-four, Charlotte is still very close to her older brother who has been her rock ever since their mother walked out on the family when she was only eleven-years-old. A few years later, their father was convicted of a horrific crime and Ian gave up his college scholarship to take care of his sister. He's an over-protective but creepy older brother to Charlotte, and she is totally clueless of his scheming.
Nikka, Charlotte’s new friend, has also an older brother Jack. These siblings grew up in the foster care system, passed from one family to another and they learned how to trust only each other. Their relationship can’t be any far more opposite than Charlotte and Ian’s seemingly ordinary but messed up family tree.
“The truth will set you free, but sometimes... you have to set yourself free from the truth.”
This psychological thriller is written in first person narrative and one that will screw with your head. Two pairs of siblings: one brother is a master manipulator and the other is caring but doesn’t know how to express it. Ian’s character is especially a very interesting study of human behaviour; the psychology of the twisted mind, he is amazingly sharp, fascinating and a master manipulator.
Fast-paced with a tightly woven plotline, I just couldn’t put this book down. I felt sorry for Charlotte for being the only normal one in the family, but it gets tiresome when she can’t see the forest for the trees. Her budding relationship with Jack gives her the push to grow a backbone and maybe just maybe clear the scales from her eyes.
From a young age, Ian and Charlotte had always played the Burken, a darker version of hide n’ seek, and it���s only when you read further along that you find out why Ian always pushed for it. This author successfully creates complicated characters, some are sympathetic, some are screwed-up and some are just pure evil. Ian and Charlotte’s childhood game becomes a deadly sport that will give your heart a complete workout. An adrenaline-pumping adventure with no need to go to the gym. Highly recommended!
4.5 Stars ~ Reviewed by Anna on behalf of KindleFriendsForever
This debut novel had me on the edge of my seat from the beginning of the story and by the time I finished reading it I felt like I just got off from a rollercoaster ride. This is an impressive first attempt by the author and I am hooked.
Charlotte and Ian are siblings and Ian has always looked after her. At the age of twenty-four, Charlotte is still very close to her older brother who has been her rock ever since their mother walked out on the family when she was only eleven-years-old. A few years later, their father was convicted of a horrific crime and Ian gave up his college scholarship to take care of his sister. He's an over-protective but creepy older brother to Charlotte, and she is totally clueless of his scheming.
Nikka, Charlotte’s new friend, has also an older brother Jack. These siblings grew up in the foster care system, passed from one family to another and they learned how to trust only each other. Their relationship can’t be any far more opposite than Charlotte and Ian’s seemingly ordinary but messed up family tree.
“The truth will set you free, but sometimes... you have to set yourself free from the truth.”
This psychological thriller is written in first person narrative and one that will screw with your head. Two pairs of siblings: one brother is a master manipulator and the other is caring but doesn’t know how to express it. Ian’s character is especially a very interesting study of human behaviour; the psychology of the twisted mind, he is amazingly sharp, fascinating and a master manipulator.
Fast-paced with a tightly woven plotline, I just couldn’t put this book down. I felt sorry for Charlotte for being the only normal one in the family, but it gets tiresome when she can’t see the forest for the trees. Her budding relationship with Jack gives her the push to grow a backbone and maybe just maybe clear the scales from her eyes.
From a young age, Ian and Charlotte had always played the Burken, a darker version of hide n’ seek, and it���s only when you read further along that you find out why Ian always pushed for it. This author successfully creates complicated characters, some are sympathetic, some are screwed-up and some are just pure evil. Ian and Charlotte’s childhood game becomes a deadly sport that will give your heart a complete workout. An adrenaline-pumping adventure with no need to go to the gym. Highly recommended!
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